Never

Never! Never again, Will you ever win My body, My love, My trust. You are the Grand-Prize winner Of my disgust! You wanted to win, Just had to win so bad.., Isn't it sad You lost all that you had..? Never, never again, Will you ever win My passion, Our lovemaking, Pleasures, you know I can give... You are denied! For as long as we both shall live. You've won, you've won, You deserve Everything you get... But isn't it sad, so very sad You lost all that you had..? Never! Never again, Will you ever win My smile, My laugh, My pride, The innermost thoughts I hold inside. My captivated stare, How I ran my fingers Through your hair, Hopes and dreams I thought we'd share... Congratulations! You win. Your lies and schemes, The games you played Did us in!! But, you're good like that... Too bad for you, This time, You won't be coming back. Isn't it sad You lost all that you had, with me..? ~Susan Ashley~ Re-edit from prose: 7/16/17 (6/29/10)

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Date: 12/31/2017 4:42:00 PM
If you inverse this poem... you're out for a lot of love... a lot of love...Want to wish you a happy New Year...and send you a big hug
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/31/2017 8:13:00 PM
Happy New Year's Eve my friend! Your visit is a delight and so is the big hug.. :) Thank you for your lovely comments but most of all, I thank you for thinking of me and stopping by.. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones, may it be safe, happy and healthy and my Heaven's angels be by your side.. Warmest wishes and hugs to you.. ~Susan
Date: 12/23/2017 3:01:00 PM
This is an excellent slam, Susan. I am sure he did not deserve anything better than this! His winnings are nothing compared to his losses! This is a great way to let off steam and get it out of your system - same way you got him out of your life. ~ warm regards // paul
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/23/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thank you Paul for your empathy and appreciation for this angry poem. I was really venting when I wrote this.. and it did help me to let go of a lot of negative feelings for sure. I surely do appreciate your kind visits and your treasured enlightened thoughts. Thank you for being a special friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 11/18/2017 10:56:00 AM
Rock 'um, sock 'um - let him have it, you did! What a therapeutic ride this free verse is and so easy to relate to the feel. I've been there. The expression is tuned in perfectly to the feel behind the words. Hugs ... CayCay
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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/18/2017 6:15:00 PM
Lol! Rock 'um, sock 'um robots! I think we are kindred spirits my dear friend.. Thank you for you awesome comment and wonderful visit. Your presence on my poetry page is so appreciated and I receive your kindness and lovely words with a grateful and joyful heart.. Hugs to you ~Susan
Date: 10/8/2017 3:51:00 PM
Susan he is not worse it. you can do better. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/8/2017 8:14:00 PM
Happy anniversary my friend.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/8/2017 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene. I agree with you, he wasn't worth it. I divorced him 10 years ago. Now I am married to the man of my dreams, our 7 year anniversary coming up soon! :)) I so appreciate your visit, your caring concern and your wonderful comment. I hope you have a fine evening my dear friend! Susan
Date: 8/6/2017 9:17:00 PM
I can relate to this so much. Amazing poems but I wouldn't expect any less :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/6/2017 9:31:00 PM
Hi Corwin, I'm glad you can relate... I guess we've all been there at some point, right..? Thank God we can express our angst about it in our written words. Thank you so very much for reading and commenting :)
Date: 7/18/2017 4:12:00 AM
I feel the strength too! Hold onto the inner strength you have :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/18/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you for kind comment Heidi! What doesn't break us makes us stronger.., right..? or is it, where it breaks, it heals stronger..? Either way, I feel like WE are strong!
Date: 7/17/2017 11:21:00 AM
A strong write Susan, I feel your strength.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/17/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth! I'm glad that the strength shines thru and made you feel :)