Darkness Descends

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Darkness Descends The Prince of Darkness beckons, as you slowly suffocate... And demons devour and await, you’re sacrificial screaming soul... The crow caws amidst the noxious nilpotent night, Perched upon tombstones that drip with blood and pain... Barren breaths amongst the ambient anguish of the lachrymal lost, The air stale with corpses laid and tossed in oblivion... In their decay, the stench of decomposing death clutches at your throat. A fecal float you fade to black before the Horsemen... Prepare for their final attack, in your lingering lonely lament, Shadow soldiers sent for your demise...you bow and accept. The crow flaps its wings...and as you try to escape you feel the stings of the anchored and abandoned... Servants of sorrow your only friends, For thus the Darkness extends beyond space and time... Sept.12.2017 In The Dark Sponsored by: Russell Sivey

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Date: 10/22/2017 4:53:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, WW! MY COMPLIMENTS!
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Date: 9/27/2017 7:09:00 AM
WW, this beutiful poem... I am happy to see you on the winners list
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Date: 9/24/2017 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations WW on your very dark and haunting write. Excellently written with amazing imagery! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations, WW on your win with a vivid poem
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:57:00 PM
Congrats WW!
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Date: 9/22/2017 11:18:00 AM
Ooh, what a poem! Congratulations, WW, on your excellent win in Russell's contest, with this soul shattering dark poem. Very well done! Love and hugs, Catie :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 11:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, WW!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:22:00 AM
Winged, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this awesome poem!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations, ^WW^, this is wonderful and deep write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:20:00 AM
Well done ^WW^, this truly is your realm. Congrats for a great write.
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:19:00 AM
Your dark place beckoned to you in this one. Well done and congratulations for writing a winner.
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Date: 9/16/2017 9:32:00 AM
Enjoyed your write very much! Dark is not what I usually enjoy but this made one of my best lust! Thanks for the share!
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:30:00 AM
Amazing write WW, you really are so good at the dark stuff. Good Luck in the contest, another true winner here ...Maria
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:31:00 PM
This is a dark poem indeed. Like the alliterations. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/13/2017 10:52:00 AM
Now that's a dark spot! I don't think a flashlight would do much good. Well done WW, best wishes...
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:52:00 AM
Oh yes! Can feel the darkness in this one! GL in contest!
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Date: 9/13/2017 4:02:00 AM
- Perfect for dark shadows, W.W. - Really great written - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2017 3:53:00 AM
I was waiting for this poem which is right up to your street. And I'm not disappointed. Well written.
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Date: 9/12/2017 10:46:00 PM
This sounds like a preview of hell, which is definitely a dark place to which I don't plan to go. A powerful write, WW!
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:46:00 PM
Lots imagery of dark matters..appropriate for the topic ..well done WW!
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