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No eye could bear to meet the beggar’s gaze ; A chasm lay between his world and theirs. Vicarious, sham empathy might raise Some paltry coins or hollow, barren prayers. Whilst mockery would be his daily bread Smug opulence passed by with callous stride, Determined to leave every plea unread And anxious to exult in plenty’s pride. The affluent adjust their silken ties, And homes with lavish luxuries adorn, Whereas the impetus for this wretch lies In having strength to greet another morn. The irony of fate had played its part, For he, like them was once stone cold of heart. 18 word challenge poetry contest Sponsored by John Hamilton 19/08/18 'Tinker,Taylor poetry contest' : sponsored by Julia Ward 15/12/18 2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 16 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney Strand Choice 10,Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/7/2019 12:08:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Wendy.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/27/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you,Line.
Date: 2/6/2019 3:54:00 PM
Wendy, what an interesting Sonnet! "The irony of fate had played its part" for sure. Congratulations on your win on Mile 16 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/27/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, for this honour and for your stamina as a judge!
Date: 2/6/2019 3:38:00 PM
I love the way the tables turned and this beggar could relate to those he'd ignored in the past, Wendy. This happens sometimes in life and we regard it as poetic justice. Excellent writing! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/27/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging remarks,Carolyn.
Date: 1/1/2019 2:56:00 PM
Well penned, Wendy. Congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/4/2019 4:31:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment,Line.
Date: 9/18/2018 1:32:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Wendy.
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Date: 9/8/2018 4:47:00 PM
Strong message well delivered. Congrats on your well deserved win, Wendy. Well done.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/4/2019 4:18:00 AM
Thank you for your continued encouragement,Line.
Date: 9/4/2018 8:46:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Wendy, excellent work - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-) <3
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/4/2019 4:18:00 AM
Thank you,Greg. I enjoy these 8 word challenges!
Date: 9/3/2018 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/4/2019 4:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and leaving this kind comment,Dale.
Date: 9/3/2018 3:20:00 PM
Amazing sonnet Wendy, on of my faves in this contest, congrats on a fine win!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/5/2018 12:34:00 PM
What an honour to be placed amongst such fantastic entries. Thank you, John!
Date: 8/29/2018 2:55:00 PM
This was so cool. I love the storyline in this and it is so true. Those who run through the day thinking they are better are far worse off than those who happily except things as they are. Nicely done Wendy.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/3/2018 4:18:00 PM
What lovely comments, Chris. Thank you so much for taking the time to give feedback.
Date: 8/19/2018 3:44:00 PM
Your words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere of understanding, that brought the whole scene to life in my mind. The emotions cling to this piece like a second skin, taking the reader confidentially into your thoughts. Well done, Emile.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/3/2018 4:20:00 PM
I really appreciate the kind words Émile and I'm honoured to receive such positive feedback.

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