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6 To 8-Sunlight In Your Eyes

Sunlight in Your Eyes Shimmer sea jaded foam green sparkling fire Alive, a soulfull of surprise dancing in the sunrise Mesmerizing stare glowing with the purest energy Vision of the heavens orbs of cosmic green stars All from the way she tilted this day to look at the sky The sun goddess reflection these eyes to so fall in love... 10/24/17 Written for contest: "6 to 8" Hosted by: Netted Onclaud WON 5th Place in Contest Reults

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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/31/2017 4:06:00 PM
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what a lucid write worthy of a place in the contest, brian... well done and thanks for participating.. best of congrats!
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2017 4:40:00 PM
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Thank you for believing that it is worthy enough and for putting on a wonderful contest!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:56:00 AM
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Congratulations, Brian on your win.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2017 3:48:00 AM
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Thank you so much
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/30/2017 4:59:00 PM
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Congratulations, Brian, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2017 12:20:00 AM
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Thanks a million Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 4:49:00 PM
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Lovely imagery in your poem, Brian. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2017 12:20:00 AM
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Thank you Sandra I am happy you enjoyed this write off mine
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2017 3:12:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Brian - hugs // S.S. :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/30/2017 10:59:00 PM
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Thank you so much Sunshine
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/30/2017 1:54:00 PM
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Back again with congratulations.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/30/2017 10:58:00 PM
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Thank you Janis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2017 5:02:00 PM
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Outstanding imagery and deep feelings in your words, Brian. Seems list a winner to me! Best wishes. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/28/2017 1:02:00 AM
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Thank you Sandra it is always a pleasure
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/25/2017 1:40:00 PM
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This will do very well in the contest. Just check the title with her directions and it will not be disqualified. Best wishes for the contest.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/25/2017 4:27:00 PM
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Thank you so much Janis for the praise and the heads up on the title
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/24/2017 5:58:00 PM
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Awesome sparkling imagery, Brian. This should do well with Nette!
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/24/2017 9:25:00 PM
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Always a pleasure when I get positive comments from you my friend, they make me proud of the words I write. Thank you
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 3:52:00 PM
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Great imagery here Brian :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/24/2017 9:23:00 PM
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Thank you Gary:-)

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