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4 and 20 Pies - No Blackbirds

4 and 20 Pies – No Blackbirds Oh, spare me the plethora of pies the thumbs-up plumbs, the pie in the sky dreams of the pie lovers, the onerous moooo of the piebald cow being milked by the pie-eyed farmer as his pied piper wife lures the chickens into a pot pie. Pie charts to measure children against nourishment, who cuts, who chooses, statistically who wins, who loses, “pies the type” of apples on the floor. It ain’t that simple, Simon say the “pietist” who fear that if Pi can’t be squared pies end is drawing near. John G. Lawless 10/9/2014 submitted to – Sheri Fresonke Harper Plentitude of Pies – Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/9/2014 9:34:00 AM
Great variations of pie John. Congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, I've never fully gotten the 4 and 20 blackbirds or the thumb out of the pie.
Date: 12/9/2014 8:59:00 AM
Interesting poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:01:00 PM
cute, I like this, congratulations, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks, I have a lot of fun playing with the wondrous whimsy of words.
Date: 12/8/2014 2:18:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats made me smile a second time - great write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:55:00 PM
I love inteligent play on words, congrats.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Date: 12/8/2014 11:00:00 AM
John, although you can count, it seems you don't eat quite right, just teasing. Lovely take on a pie poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Sheri for your time and effort in sponsoring the contest.
Date: 10/10/2014 6:00:00 PM
Witty and clever take on this pie theme, John! Very enjoyable Hope it does well in the contest. // paul
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:24:00 PM
Classy way to do that contest!! wish I could be this clever I will probably just do one of those Epulaeryu form poems!! You are a SMART writer.
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Date: 10/9/2014 5:09:00 PM
LOl love the humour here - good luck with the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 5:31:00 PM
:-) my pleasure XX
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John Lawless
Date: 10/9/2014 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comment means a lot to an old guy with a flaky crust.

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