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11 little poems

Twisted soul
is the fire.
without direction,
just the ambition.

I stray at the cherry forest,
listen the sadness of wind.
Last year,you were here,
This year,flowers wither

The smell of despair
is letting people believe in hope

Memory is an axe,
it opens a new world
and pushes us into the abyss

is ice sliding on your skin

The veil of death
is the smile of life

What could pen do?
Painting your face,
And learning to forget the love

If love is the sea,
i prefer to be the weeds
in the riverbank.
I know i can't get you,
but i'm glad that your smile
dampen my feet.

I lap the wound of love,
and find
that the stars are night's tears

is the shroud of autumn
and the wedding dress of the spring

What's the dream?
A butterfly flew over my fingertip

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Date: 12/8/2019 9:52:00 AM
Fantastic poems.. All of them are gems and i couldn't select one..
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Date: 12/2/2019 1:56:00 PM
I was taken with number 9. All were wonderful... and different and beautiful. Ann
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Date: 12/1/2019 10:45:00 AM
Another beautiful, somewhat sad feeling piece that also brightens somehow.
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Jeonleung Choi
Date: 12/1/2019 11:01:00 PM
Thanks for your comments,my poems are very dark and blue,because i lived in a dangerous country,the despair and sadness become the starry night in my life.
Date: 11/27/2019 3:36:00 PM
Your words are light and heavy at the same time. I think you will fit in well. It must add additional challenge writing in a different language. I imagine Mandarin is your mother tongue. My wife is Chinese but from Hong Kong. You might appreciate a poem I wrote for her Father titled Wonderful William. I have a translated piece but it won’t post on this site.
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Jeonleung Choi
Date: 12/1/2019 10:59:00 PM
you're right,Mandarin is my mother language,it's a beautiful language,but it's very complicated and profound to let Foreigners to know,becuase it's an unique language that has its own aesthetics and culture
Date: 11/25/2019 2:41:00 PM
These are extraordinary poems – glimpses into your psyche. My favorites are #10 and #8. What nationality are you? I am French and German. I look forward to reading you again. Thank you for reading my work. Best to you in your writing endeavors, / Maurice
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Jeonleung Choi
Date: 11/25/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thanks for your passionate comment,i am Chinese,English poems are my interest,i didn't have enough faith in it,but i really appreciate that you would like it
Date: 11/19/2019 9:48:00 PM
What a beautiful collection of short verse poems, each with its own attributes that had me thinking and imagining the picture that arose from each one and may I be the first to welcome to poetry soup Jeonleung, looking forward to reading more of your beautiful and intellectual writes . . . : )
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Jeonleung Choi
Date: 11/20/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thanks for your comments,i just write these in the midnight,it's a good time to wander in the poetic world.and i'm really glad that there are people reading my poems