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.game Over.

ive lost the fight with my life. it's over now im done i need to go i cant give in so easy to turn and run. i search and search all over. but there's nothing to live for. look left right everywhere ive won the fight but lost the war.

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Date: 5/16/2009 12:10:00 AM
strong one, remember we are not perfect. You will find you re looking for just be patient
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Date: 4/16/2009 5:58:00 AM
you say what many "poets" are afraid to say. that in its self is a form of brilliance. bravo
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:21:00 AM
buy her some flowers and a bottle of aliza, hoped i spelled it right, seems like your releasing ya feustration with some poetry and thats the best time when it bgings out great work. enjoyed reading it. have a great day.
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