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-sight of our love-

dance with me this rainy night, feel my skin as we embrace- your barren fawn nape i trace, i hold you achingly tight; the sight of our love is right stardust spreads around us (grace) for love is never contrite- let me take a breath and write, then i’ll wear that gown of lace; the resonance of your face you i shall never replace, we shall reach the highest height- burning embers, you ignite and your mind i shan’t disgrace; seize the night at a slow pace an aria of light (bright) glazed moon glistens on your face- cataclysm shan’t erase the sweet might in our delight; the sight of our love is right ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12.23.19

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Date: 12/27/2019 11:56:00 PM
A well-deserved win, my friend!
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:28:00 PM
Laura you write in love so well! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:06:00 AM
Beautiful. Great Job...................
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Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win with such a wonderful poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/26/2019 10:05:00 AM
thank you sweet Subimal. I am going to email you later, I need to talk to you :) Be blessed! x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/24/2019 8:32:00 AM
Very romantic indeed, Lu. Love the write! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and your family. Sending love & Hugs.. Charlie :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/24/2019 11:20:00 AM
aww thanks dear Charles, you too! May your holiday be full of laughter and love....blessings from across the miles x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/23/2019 2:21:00 PM
Oooh how romantic... the imagery of romance is great here and that last stanza is brilliant..
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/24/2019 7:38:00 AM
it's in the air this time of year :) Thanks SO, and may your holiday season be full of laughter and joy. (give the furballs my best!) thanks again... x:-)-lullooo
Date: 12/23/2019 10:49:00 AM
Wow, you are on a roll today my friend. This was absolutely beautiful. This is a poem wrapped in a smile. Nicely done Luloo.
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Date: 12/24/2019 7:35:00 AM
thank you dear Chris... x:-)-luloo