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As spun yarn snow covered paths Frozen in a white coat A drowsy silence fur on trees Silver icicles dripping Fluffy snow in the air the sky is lead grey Lights on the tree are lit mood Christmas holidays 15.12.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved howmanysyllables.com 3, 4, 2, 4, 5, 3, 2, 3 ,2, 3, 3, 5, 6, 1, 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 1/2/2023 1:25:00 PM

Sunshine, a lovely Yalto! Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, and I love the image too, Constance

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/27/2022 9:36:00 AM

Love this Sunshine Smile, congratulations on your win! Beautiful picture and poetry in Yalto form that has gotten popular! Happy Holidays!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/21/2022 5:53:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a beautiful poem and presentation, congratulations on your winning placement! Happy Holidays!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/20/2022 12:20:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win for a truly lovely Yalto.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/20/2022 4:50:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/20/2022 12:58:00 AM

Grand word painting. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/19/2022 4:17:00 PM

You should write more Yaltos, Anne-Lise;-) This is beautiful! Love it. Congratulations on your top win!

Valsa George

Date: 12/19/2022 5:02:00 AM

The land clad in white coat is so beautifully presented. Against the lead grey sky, the fluffy snow in the air itself is a Christmas decoration. A lovely entry for the contest Smile. Hugs to make you warm.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/16/2022 8:34:00 AM

A marvelous poem, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Fit for Christmas. Hugs xxx and Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/16/2022 7:52:00 AM

Superb poem, Sunshine. Hugs.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/16/2022 5:43:00 AM

A sweet poem Sunshine, and with the restrictions you had to contend with this style, its amazing. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2022 4:07:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. These are not so easy to write but you have done a very seamless job. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2022 4:14:00 AM

- Like a puzzle, Sara - it wasn't written on 1-2-3 :))) - Thank you very much :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/15/2022 3:25:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, oh such a beautiful poem you created. Hugs Merry Christmas. /Darlene

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2022 2:44:00 PM

You captured the Christmas scene well in your verse Anne. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/15/2022 2:36:00 PM

You have illuminated my heart with this poem Sunshine, sending you a prayer of win and success, and hug to make your day brighter.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/15/2022 2:06:00 PM

You aced the form with such lovely descriptions of the holiday season, Anne-Lise. Images scrolled as I read your poem. Splendid write despite the syllable constraints. Best to you.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/15/2022 2:03:00 PM

this is very lovely, anne-lise! i always love the photos you choose to include with your poems as well...