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The earth is dressed in a white robe - snow graffiti on the wall Deliciously frozen thoughts melting away into another Kingdom Our words served in gold of passion and sweetly kiss Colour shines transparent As the soft feeling of heated drops tumble down the cheeks saving grace The tears will fall on fertile soil, quietly the water decreases There are no limitations so make your heart strong not weak Fight your worries and sorrows - taste the love Reflections kissing warmly each memory stored precious Tasting salt upon lips Because dearest lily of the deep lake When a soul knows the unknown pathway leads upwards We all have a special place in this world no one else can fill or walk alongside Listen to the sound of angels playing harps from above Smell the roses and breathe in the fresh clean air True love from the heart of a flower never dies, always giving goosebumps a new meaning A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 08.07.2016 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 7/20/2016 9:25:00 AM
A stellar and inspiring write/collaboration from both of my favourite and talented poets! Love and enjoyed the read. Thanks a lot for sharing! My Best wishes to both of you always. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 7/20/2016 12:14:00 PM
- Many thanks for the beautiful words and friendly visit, my friend Leonora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/17/2016 4:04:00 PM
A very beautiful poem with angels playing harps x
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Date: 7/18/2016 7:36:00 AM
- I appreciate your visits and uplifting and positive comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2016 3:51:00 PM
Lovely piece you two. love phyl
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:14:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2016 9:09:00 AM
I loved that first part and the snowy imagery. But sure glad it is summer!!!
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:43:00 PM
.... Me too :))) - I appreciate your visits and uplifting and positive comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 12:37:00 PM
Excellently done how thought melts and drifts to different places in different ways where love is the essence. A nice 7 my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:42:00 PM
- Bl, glad you enjoy it :) - Many thanks for the beautiful words a 7 and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2016 5:01:00 PM
awhh, really sweet from the two of you, anne... happy huggs and a greeat sunday to you!
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Date: 7/10/2016 6:22:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2016 2:33:00 PM
Simply awesome, Anne-Lise. Thanks for the cute comments and for dropping by. ;)
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:27:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2016 9:13:00 AM
Ahh!! Great collaboration..Sara..Thanks for stopping by.
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Date: 7/9/2016 1:39:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2016 3:21:00 AM
You two are magic toether! Though you both have different styles your words blend together so harmoniously that I wouldn't know who wrote what. I love this masterpiece! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:40:00 AM
- Connie, glad you enjoy it :) - Many thanks for the beautiful words a 7 and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 5:07:00 PM
WOW...beautiful collab...you two work well together...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:39:00 AM
- Thank you W.W., I greatly appreciate your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 1:37:00 PM
And goosebumps indeed are created by this poem which is so well crafted and full of positive energy! Thanks for sharing this it brightened my day :)
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Date: 7/8/2016 2:05:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, Kyle :) - thank you for nice visit and positive comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 12:41:00 PM
A beautiful and moving collab A-L and Liam...quite lovely.
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Date: 7/8/2016 12:53:00 PM
- Thanks for your comments and friendly visit, Tim :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 8:52:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise, You and Liam have penned a well written piece.It is a beautiful love story that's timeless. It had lovely imagery and content. A enormous seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/8/2016 11:30:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Alexis :) - Many thanks for the beautiful words a 7 and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 8:29:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful n' captivating love poem that you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I truly enjoy it!A very beautiful, divine, heartfelt, love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful.Just heavenly!I love it!A true glowing golden gem! Just amazing!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 7/8/2016 11:29:00 AM
- Dorian, I highly appreciate your comment a 7 on our new poem: - The Soul Knows - Wishing you a very lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 8:19:00 AM
Sunshine, this is a lovely collab, well done both of you and I am loving your poem 7 ~
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Date: 7/8/2016 11:24:00 AM
- Many thanks for the beautiful words a 7 and friendly visit, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 6:19:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, A marvelous collaboration here for sure. Your articulation here of what "The Soul Knows" presents a compelling word picture for the reader. The descriptive imagery is both powerful and palpable. Outstanding write my great friends!! Bravo!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:03:00 AM
- If you have time .... I see that you have not read our: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - - Highly appreciate your comment on our new: - The Soul Knows - Many thanks dear Gary - Always a pleasure to write with both of you - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 5:53:00 AM
Great collab:) "The tears will fall on fertile soil" - true lines that reflect that those who sow in tears will reap in joy:)
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Date: 7/8/2016 11:23:00 AM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and lovely comments - thank you, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 4:57:00 AM
Truly a pleasure pal writing this with you Anne lise thank you deeply dear friend wishing you a blessing of a weekend
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:07:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to write with you, Liam - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 3:54:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous! Another divine collaboration of you two! A seven to each dear, Anne-Lise and dear Liam!
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:27:00 AM
- Many thanks for the beautiful words a 7 and friendly visit, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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