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21.10.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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1st place in the contest

Premiere Contest Winner- The Sandman Arrives -

                             Deadline  ...
                                    bedtime
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Date: 11/1/2025 2:18:00 PM
Back with congrats!
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Date: 10/29/2025 1:22:00 PM
Mums around the corner, teehee, Tweedledee and tweedledum, the real adventure cometh, lest it's dud, then you've got a new partner, Aloha, William.
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Date: 10/27/2025 9:07:00 AM
Congrats for the top win. Now time to go to bed.
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Date: 10/27/2025 2:24:00 AM
Just perfect, congratulations
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Date: 10/26/2025 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on your top win! Cute picture!
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Date: 10/26/2025 12:18:00 PM
Way to go. This was super cool
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Date: 10/26/2025 8:57:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations for your contest top win, dear friend.
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Date: 10/26/2025 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in this contest, dear poetess, with a very thoughtful take on the prompt. It can serve as a reminder to many parents who have to deal with unruly low age children. Wish you a pleasant coming new week.
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Date: 10/26/2025 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Anne-Lise! Really punchy, this one : ).
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2025 8:04:00 AM
- Yes, hit the bass drum this time Trina :))) - Thank you very much for your congratulations :) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2025 6:44:00 AM
This is so adorable my dear poet friend Anne-Lise! Big Congrats on your well-deserved trophy win! Thanks for sharing! God bless you always. Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2025 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your congratulations, Len :) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2025 6:40:00 AM
Good one - a deadline not always followed :-))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2025 8:06:00 AM
- Rules can be stretched far, Daniel :))) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2025 3:45:00 AM
Children do not want to sleep as they are in a playful mood. But parents want them to sleep. Well done dear Anne. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2025 6:19:00 AM
- WOooW ... a trophy win, thank you very much Valsa (a huge surprise :) - hugs
Date: 10/23/2025 10:19:00 AM
Beautifully crafted verse, Anne-Lise. This is a most charming footle, so delightful.
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Date: 10/23/2025 5:16:00 AM
Very well expressed.
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Date: 10/23/2025 12:35:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, A truly excellent Footle. Warm regards Howard
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Date: 10/22/2025 6:05:00 PM
good one!
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Date: 10/22/2025 5:25:00 AM
This is an absolutely adorable footle to NA, so sweet. Pic reminds me of pillow fights with my bro who was just 18 months older and swung a fierce pillow. CayCay
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Date: 10/21/2025 3:28:00 PM
Ahh!! I like this one. Can't children get wound up when it comes. Sara K
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Date: 10/21/2025 1:14:00 PM
Good one!
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Date: 10/21/2025 12:04:00 PM
So cool- reminds me of myself, lol
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Date: 10/21/2025 11:50:00 AM
Delightful! My grandson keeps texting me goodnight with multiple hearts, etc.. until my daughter reminds him he has school and has to go to sleep xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2025 11:57:00 AM
- How cute ... you make me jealous, Kim <3 - (I've had that time... but, now they're adults) - hugs
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