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- The Happiness Come And Go -




          It is the glittery eyes of your
          that cause my heart to find nourishment

          You do not see my searching eyes
          Feels like I'm swimming in an ocean all alone

          Is there a formula for happiness - life's fragile tangents
          Let the roses live and let the thorns quietly die

          You are beautiful like a pearl in the oyster
          I was just a friend when you needed a shoulder to cry on

          I can read your divine and the powerful face
          My great love which was awakened by longing ... is dead

          Along with my thoughts I throw red the rose petals on the sea
          Is it the past or the future that cause the blood flowing






  * ("Some cause happiness wherever they go;. Others, whenever they go" 
       - Oscar Wilde)

      Sponsor: Giorgio V.
      Contest Name: Relate your poem to one of these Quotes 
      Deadline:1/2/2014 12:00:00 AM



03.12.2013
A-L Andresen :)

(1st place in the contest)

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Date: 12/24/2013 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
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Date: 12/25/2013 2:59:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/21/2013 7:36:00 PM
A very deep and thought provoking poem. I enjoyed it very much. Very well written, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 12/22/2013 6:28:00 AM
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Date: 12/20/2013 4:25:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Anne
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Date: 12/20/2013 4:26:00 AM
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Date: 12/19/2013 8:56:00 PM
Anne, Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2013 2:52:00 AM
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Date: 12/19/2013 8:38:00 PM
So sad, but powerful. Congrats, Anne Lise!
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Date: 12/20/2013 2:52:00 AM
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Date: 12/19/2013 6:56:00 PM
Ahh..many congratulations Anne Lise..so happy you made #1.....
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Date: 12/20/2013 2:51:00 AM
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Date: 12/19/2013 4:40:00 PM
Anne thank you for your visit earlier, and congrats for your beautiful winning too :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/20/2013 2:51:00 AM
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Date: 12/19/2013 11:19:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Anne
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Date: 12/19/2013 12:23:00 PM
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Date: 12/18/2013 11:05:00 PM
Is there a formula for happiness ? I think our happiness lies in our hands, very nice love it.... With love ... Ellie...
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Date: 12/19/2013 3:53:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Elizabeth. - welcome back whenever you want :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/14/2013 3:35:00 PM
''HY ANNE thanks so much for your comment i really appreciate it and also i luv this poem it is really wonderful,but you should know that i just a beginner in poetry and I've read so many poems i told my self let me write start writing poems it an easy way of say what you feel any way tnx so much.....xoxoxo
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Date: 12/14/2013 3:42:00 PM
- Keep writing the way you feel and think. :) - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2013 2:58:00 PM
"Is there a formula for happiness - life's fragile tangents. Let the roses live and let the thorns quietly die", oh my! I really love these lines, simple but so true :D good luck on the contest too Anne, this poem is so lovely :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/13/2013 3:00:00 PM
- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Yanny. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/12/2013 8:43:00 PM
Was just about to say I read that quote recently, then for once I kept reading lol, and now remember where. My favorite Oscar Wild quote is, "The play was a great success, but the audience was a Disaster." I, maybe in vain, think that quote often relates to me, lol. I enjoyed this poem, trying to make a few rounds. For once I'm doing more commenting than posting. Anyway not the tangents your poem spoke of. Great Work.
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:01:00 AM
- I'm glad you "discovered" my poems, Wayland :)) - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2013 3:24:00 PM
If I could write the poems The awesome way you do The whole world would read along I wouldn't have to ask them to If I could pen the words As perfect as yours are I could climb the highest mountain And catch a shooting star
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Date: 12/9/2013 2:43:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2013 1:48:00 AM
I've missed going through your poems during the week due to work pressure. I then decided to visit your site on a Sunday, just to immerse myself in your usual intelligent writ. I've enjoy this contest poem and I thank you for taking your time to express the pain of loss so succinctly. Friend, JM
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Date: 12/8/2013 8:34:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/6/2013 9:57:00 AM
A great and thoughtful poem... Yours are always the best.
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Date: 12/6/2013 11:31:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Carol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2013 10:12:00 PM
You express yourself so perfectly my friend! I may not be on much for about week, I'm having problems with my teeth, big time pain, I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday, and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through the weekend! So now think of me these few days! I'll try to get on soon!
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Date: 12/6/2013 3:10:00 AM
- Huff .... very painful ... long to wait until Monday :(((( - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Russell. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2013 7:13:00 PM
Great poem!
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Date: 12/6/2013 3:07:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Tahbee. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2013 6:08:00 PM
loved what you wrote about the roses great poem thanks for sharing. cheri
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Date: 12/6/2013 3:07:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2013 5:01:00 PM
seek an you will always find, the lover with the cute behind, don't let the bugger up and go, catch hold and try to maybe show, the sweet-ness in your mind, kind meets kind you know... Don re:"The Happiness Come And Go" Anne Lise Andresen
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Date: 12/6/2013 3:06:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2013 7:50:00 AM
Moving, touching, and so genuine. Happiness can be so elusive.
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Date: 12/5/2013 7:52:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2013 10:43:00 AM
what a deep, moving write, anne...happiness is a choice!... may your day find you well!..:) huggs
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Date: 12/4/2013 10:50:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2013 10:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your interesting work today..I like the quote that you chose..I noticed that you stopped by my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2013 4:29:00 PM
Okay...Sara
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Date: 12/4/2013 10:50:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2013 8:44:00 AM
Good one, Anne Lise....You are a ray of light......shine on...
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Date: 12/4/2013 10:49:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2013 8:01:00 AM
One of the loveliest I've read...thank you Anne Lise..keeping this one in my favorites to read again..
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Date: 12/4/2013 10:49:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words and fav. - pleasant with your feedback,Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2013 7:46:00 AM
One mo time, si'l vous plait mon ami (impressed?)
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Date: 12/4/2013 10:51:00 AM
............... YES..........................
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