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The sun disappears in the horizon somewhere it's not just me who regards the beauty The horizon is a lovely color spectrum The sky is like a watercolor paper The colors float across the sky Small narrow clouds create stripes The sun drink some water from the ocean Dipped its colors carefully in the ocean Playing a bit with the waves It is an amazing sight The colors are so intensive It is sensual and beautiful The sun disappears in the horizon somewhere I do not know where but it has given me an inner peace and pleasure 03.04.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/5/2014 6:15:00 PM
Painted a very pretty picture in my mind. I love beautiful sunsets!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/6/2014 6:30:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Robert, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2014 4:01:00 PM
I like your writing style because you write clearly and concisely, no wasted words. There's definitely food for thought here.
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:11:00 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Chris, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2013 4:40:00 PM
Words of peace and tranquility. Every line is full of images that take the reader on a journey of beauty. Nice job
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Date: 11/14/2013 2:42:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Robin, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/4/2013 12:49:00 PM
The title says it all, really enjoyed the imagery in this write, OK I'll say it, it was both beautiful and sensual :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 12:52:00 PM
- Beautiful said, Gary ! - Enjoyable with a visit from you ,your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/20/2013 5:56:00 AM
I do not know where but it has given me an inner peace and pleasure sums it up perfectly fine pen
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Date: 5/20/2013 5:59:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Linda, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2013 3:29:00 AM
this one i really like.... i can't help but be thrown not only into your world but also in the remembrance of your own special place. .. i send you " The sky like a watercolor paperr, The colors float across the sky...:) huggs!
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Date: 5/20/2013 5:59:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Nette, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2013 5:31:00 PM
Wonderfully descriptive! You can actually see the sunset in your words.
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Date: 4/17/2013 12:34:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Kim, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2013 11:35:00 AM
very colorful, you seem like you speak from an artists mouth... Are you an artist?
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Date: 4/16/2013 11:38:00 AM
- No, I'm not ... but thanks ! - Enjoyable with a visit from you Danielle, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2013 10:45:00 AM
very descriptive poetry! Made me descriptivisualize the scene!
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:47:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Stephanie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2013 3:05:00 AM
What a lovely, 'colorful' piece! We marvel at nature's wonders, and feel reassured that the sun will rise again! Well done Anne Lise!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thank you for your kind remarks... they are much appreciated!)
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:07:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Keith, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2013 5:10:00 PM
Picturesque! I feel the same when Im admiring the views from the beach..... calming. :)
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Date: 4/12/2013 2:08:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Jennifer, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 1:50:00 PM
The Sun is a very sensuous and intelligent source; good to know it intends to return Anne - J.A.B. %
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:05:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Justin, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 9:34:00 AM
a very amazing view you picture here my friend Anne Lise..so like it...thanks for sharing and for passing by on my poem always...Just been here sometimes co'z I'm so busy with everything..next week is the start of my vacation..27 days yahoo!!! (^__^) have a nice day..hugssss!!! Maria
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2013 9:55:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Maria, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 3:45:00 AM
awwww....am so into it...beautiful write Anne...like painting shades of peace across my heart...thanks once more..your pieces inspire :-)
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:50:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Word, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 3:02:00 AM
A feeling of serenity is felt when reading this. :)
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:07:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Sasha, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 12:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Anne-Lise! Gazing at the sun as it is setting can have a calming effect. There is something so peaceful about it. It makes time go slower somehow :)
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:59:00 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Toquyen, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 11:58:00 AM
Anne Lise, all I can say after reading this is Wow! Really beautiful piece of poetry :) xoxox
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:03:00 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Wilma, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 7:04:00 AM
beautifully written, Anne Lise. your poems are really sweet.
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Date: 4/7/2013 7:06:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Dinda, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 2:24:00 AM
SPECTACULAR write here, Anne! Simply dazzling and spellbinding - the sun and the ocean. Wow... ;) you sparked my interest! Favoriting it! Love these 4 lines in general: The sun disappears in the horizon somewhere it's not just me who regards the beauty The horizon is a lovely color spectrum The sky is like a watercolor paper................... Nicely crafted work, my friend! ~~DWB
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:05:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you David, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2013 3:52:00 PM
I like this picture very much Anne, have an awesome weekend xo's ;}
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:31:00 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Debbie, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2013 12:28:00 PM
Your poem is pretty Anne, and the ending is wonderful. thank you for the comment. I am doing fine, however, I don't share my tears and pain with my daughter. I think that would not help either of us. so i cry when I'm all alone. That is what my last poem was basically about. thank you for sharing your tender comment. xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/6/2013 1:01:00 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Linda, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2013 10:19:00 AM
beautifully written and ever so visual...
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Date: 4/6/2013 10:33:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Harry, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise for this beautiful descriptive narrative of God's stunning creation. You continue to inspire me.
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Date: 4/6/2013 10:32:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Kim, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2013 1:31:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:01:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Ravi, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2013 10:44:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you have penned. Nature is amazing. Thanks for sharing.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/6/2013 5:00:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Jon, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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