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lost love, past, memories, sorrow, tears


A broken heart 
who humbly cries 
As the flames began melting 
tears hidden under the seabed

Sizzling hot a trail 
sparkles into the night sky
love comes in colors 
that kisses burn passion

Following your starlight flooding
memories are forever made pure
Even if you are not here
I can feel your warm breath 

Winking to the soul dream of dreams 
Together we can build a future palace
one without fear and pain
Destiny will be eternities shooting arrow 
 
Catching many rainbow on our roads path
Cupid strikes flying saucers land in your space 
wondering if things will ever be the same again
Captivating an angel strums tugging heartstrings 

Do you hear still the melody 
to the most beautiful song playing
Warmly exploring deeply touching tunes 
Covering the bed with rose petals 

Music plays a heartfelt chant sighs 
I miss you dearest flower forever more 
just like the desert misses rain
Whispers held on a cloud of breath beautiful 







A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
10.02.2016
(unrhymed quatrain)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/5/2016 10:44:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful...
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Date: 3/5/2016 12:12:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/2/2016 11:02:00 PM
My what a beautiful collaboration to have discovered. So glad to have found you...
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Date: 3/3/2016 2:54:00 AM
- Charlie, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/17/2016 9:14:00 AM
Also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated bless you all
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:13:00 AM
Your pen flowers diamond beautiful in this Anne lise thank you dear pal for the pleasure of joining pens with you wishing you a blessed week ahead
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Date: 2/19/2016 2:32:00 PM
- Without you ..... I could not write this beautiful poem, dear friend Liam - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2016 12:23:00 AM
Sorry, forgot the 7. T.J
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:28:00 AM
............ and a 7, Teppo - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2016 12:20:00 AM
A beautiful write, Anne-Lise, in another great collaborating with Liam. Well worth a seven. A lovely poem. T.J
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:27:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments ..........................
Date: 2/14/2016 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful words by the two of you. Enjoyed. love phyl
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:00:00 PM
- I'm glad you enjoy it, dear Phyllis - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2016 9:21:00 PM
Well done Ann-Lise and Liam; a collaboration that truly worked - great - Lindsay
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:11:00 AM
- Lindsay, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2016 8:33:00 AM
Simply superb...great collaboration Anne-Lise..."Destiny will be eternities shooting arrow"...now why didn't I think of that...with admiration... ^WW^
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:10:00 AM
- Winged, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2016 7:40:00 AM
always a pleasure to read your beautiful collaborations Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:20:00 AM
- (I) We'll post a new today .... welcomed back later dear friend, Jan :) - I'm glad you enjoy this one :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2016 3:40:00 AM
Your collaboration opens the door to love's longing bliss. A romantic lovely piece to share for Valentine's Day! Mahalo!
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:30:00 AM
- Valentine's poem comes later today, Connie :)- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful, picturesque write, Anne and Liam. congrats for another successful collab! hugs
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:28:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 3:46:00 PM
this one was very beautiful. Great imagery from the both of you.
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:25:00 AM
- Andrea, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 3:12:00 PM
Truly an excellent collaboration, Anne-Lise and Liam...sweetly romantic. Whether happy or sad, you make music with words! All the best...paul
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:27:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 1:41:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, a beautiful collaboration once more between yourself and Liam. A Belated congratulations to you both for this beautiful work. On the breath of a sigh these words do softly flow within me to touch my heart. You do write incredible poetry when you both write together. Let your songs sing. The tears are brought forth as both your emotions flow as one down the page. It is a blessing to read poetry created by you both. Excellent poetry. A 7 and into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:25:00 AM
- I'm glad you enjoy it, Vladislav :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 + fav. and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 12:39:00 PM
you both do beautiful music together, anne and liam... i likey!..huggs
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:40:00 PM
- Nette , thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 11:30:00 AM
together, the two of you....create inspiration I aspire to....the Beauty of words is the greatest reward....just like the muse of the pen is mightier than the sword....awesome job you two....;)
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:40:00 PM
- Eric, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration here, I really enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:07:00 AM
- I'm glad you enjoy it, Angeline :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2016 7:04:00 AM
An excellent collab Anne-Lise and Liam. The reader can not tell where one writer ends and the other begins. Great job. A7 for sure.
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Date: 2/11/2016 7:50:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2016 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely lovely friend filled with romantic vibration. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
- Bl, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2016 3:49:00 PM
Tenderly romantic and beautifully written poem! Another blooming collaboration of Anne-Lise and Liam! A seven to each!
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Date: 2/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2016 2:08:00 PM
Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 2/10/2016 2:09:00 PM
- I'm glad you enjoy it, Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)