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Angel Fury

Hopes of escape from complicated betrayal My strength fades as dusk The pain after the earthquake, the blood congealed in the veins Forbid injustice, rape and murder My sorrowful song and tears, ceases when the tide flows over the ocean The love must be redeemed from the birth cradle Have mercy on us almighty God above A deep unspoken prayer ~ in the end we will fall 09.08.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/6/2017 3:59:00 PM
Powerful write Anne Lise. His Mercy so Great, and His Peace... His Peace being simply unimaginable. Such a Glorious God we have! May He Bless us all!
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Date: 1/7/2017 11:07:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, Vincent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2016 4:23:00 PM
A beautiful heartfelt prayer of a great heart. A beautiful seven my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Date: 8/23/2016 6:05:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and visits, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/13/2016 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful write Anne-Lise, a well written prayer. hope you are well and enjoying your weekend. Take care.......Vera
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Date: 8/13/2016 7:14:00 AM
- Thank you enjoy my poem "MERCY" dear Vera - All well, nice to see you - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/12/2016 6:17:00 AM
God would bless for must by the softness of your grand prayer my dear....a awesome write !
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:24:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and visits, Nilima :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/12/2016 1:39:00 AM
Well expressed prayer:)
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:24:00 AM
- Jo, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/11/2016 4:34:00 PM
When our life journey becomes too difficult to cope with, then it makes sense that we turn to divine power for help and mercy. This is one of your best poems, Anne Lise. ~ Regards & hugs // paul
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:23:00 AM
- Thanks Paul, very much appreciate your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2016 12:07:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned a sad thought provoking write. Well done.A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:22:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2016 9:07:00 AM
A prophetic write Sunshine...nicely penned...hugs
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:35:00 AM
- Joseph, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2016 1:37:00 AM
Wondrous writing dear, Anne-Lise. A giant seven. Hugs
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:53:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and visits, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2016 1:16:00 AM
Brilliant poem Sunshine ... :) as much as I enjoyed reading it, very reflective.. :)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:54:00 AM
- Thanks Olive, very much appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2016 12:31:00 AM
Excellent. Very thought provoking and deep write poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:52:00 AM
- Ravi, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 10:55:00 PM
Very deep words...
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:55:00 AM
- Thanks, very much appreciate your comments Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 9:27:00 PM
Powerful verse Anne-Lise, we will never overcome evil alone...
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:56:00 AM
- Charlie, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 4:56:00 PM
Yes the events of these days, do stir one's emotions Anne-Lisa. This is poetry at it's very best..
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:56:00 AM
- Thanks, very much appreciate your comments Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 3:52:00 PM
It has such a fateful ending. Enjoyed seeing this recent post of yours!
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:51:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and visits, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 3:28:00 PM
Hard emotions, the anger resentment and all things that bring us down, the prayer for mercy despite it all. Well expressed!
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:57:00 AM
- Thanks Casarah, very much appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 3:28:00 PM
life has no mercy, it gives and takes without notice or concern, we alone battle our emotions over life's discourse..my first thought after reading your thought provoking poem my poetic friend
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:57:00 AM
- Thanks, very much appreciate your comments Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 2:27:00 PM
Just the word betrayal, stirs so many painful emotions. A lot like death. You have expressed it very well, AL.
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Date: 8/9/2016 2:52:00 PM
- Evil has no mercy, we see and hear about it every day Daniel - Thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 1:54:00 PM
A sad piece but wonderfully written A-L. Have a great week.
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Date: 8/9/2016 2:49:00 PM
- Thanks Tim, very much appreciate your comments - Happy week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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