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Sparkling sugar tops
Song about a cold winter
Frost is in the air

The first snowflake kiss
Happy first day of winter
Let me warm my heart






24.11.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 12/6/2015 8:41:00 PM
Nicely done Anne:)
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:23:00 AM
- Edward, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/1/2015 9:54:00 AM
A nice set of haiku delighted the winter with snowflakes. A beautiful imagery of your lovely soft ink. 7 sure. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:39:00 AM
- Dear Bl, thanks for the lovely comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/30/2015 3:42:00 PM
as the white cap is on the mountain i can relate anne lise beautifully painted piece dear pal wishing you a blessed week
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:37:00 AM
- Winter is arrived :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/28/2015 8:32:00 PM
I can imagine it right thru ur creative write.....though never seen it.....wonderful...regards
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Date: 11/29/2015 7:31:00 AM
- I will e-mail a little snow to you, Rizwana :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/28/2015 3:19:00 PM
Dancing in the snow and those unforgettable snow days when laughter was heard upon the wind . . . along with a snowball or two!!
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:30:00 PM
- A cold snowball right in the neck :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/27/2015 6:01:00 PM
Anne Lise love this one girl, expecially the line the first snowflake kiss, what a wonderful image it leaves in ones mind, completely inspirational my friend, all I can say is awesome, love it cheri
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Date: 11/28/2015 7:48:00 AM
- Cherl, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/26/2015 8:13:00 AM
Snowflakes kiss to warm the heart .. nicely done Anne...Hugs
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Date: 11/26/2015 8:17:00 AM
- Wet, cold kiss :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/26/2015 7:51:00 AM
This is a lovely write Anne Lise, especially love the second one :) hugs xxx
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Date: 11/26/2015 8:02:00 AM
- Winter is arrived :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Wilma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/26/2015 1:39:00 AM
Wonderful imagery. These haiku are going a long way in helping prepare for the season.
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:51:00 AM
- David, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/25/2015 8:55:00 AM
A delightful pair of haiku, Anne Lise! Though both lovely, I especially like the 2nd one...that last line tickled my heart:) hugs // paul
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:50:00 AM
- Paul, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/25/2015 8:49:00 AM
The haiku form is perfect, AnneLisa, the imagery original, the ending just as one would expect on a cold frosty morning. Bravo! Thank you for stopping by. / M
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:50:00 AM
- Maurice, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 9:21:00 PM
Beautiful pen Anne-Lise! You bring the spirit of winter in these two Haiku, the second one is very heartwarming n; sweet:))Very beautifully painted pieces my dear friend, Anne.Enjoyed it!A 7! Sending you my love and prayers!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:50:00 AM
- Dorian, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 3:42:00 PM
wonderful imagery Anne Lise I particularly love the sparkling sugar tops in the first haiku :-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:49:00 AM
- Jan, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 3:30:00 PM
So lovely A-L
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:49:00 AM
- Tim, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 12:14:00 PM
Nice 5 7 5 work here. You capture the winter spirit in these poems. If you find the time please comment on my Paranoid Vistas poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/24/2015 12:50:00 PM
- Matthew, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 10:17:00 AM
Lovely, Sunshine.....you warm the heart in the cold of winter. Hugs
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Date: 11/24/2015 12:49:00 PM
- Winter is arrived :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 9:09:00 AM
This poem feels like a comforting cup of hot chocolate on a cold winter's night.
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:18:00 AM
- Perfect fit for an advertisement for hot chocolate ? :))) -Joyful words from you Frederic, maybe I should have thought of another business :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 8:18:00 AM
i like the sweet, engaging tone of your first encounter with snow, anne... must be winter again... huggs to you this tuesday!
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:02:00 AM
- Winter in Norway is long, dark and cold, Nette :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 3:00:00 AM
Just lovely, Anne Lise. We had our first snow for the season last Friday. -hugs- T.J
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:00:00 AM
- First snow on Friday here too,Teppo :) - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 2:39:00 AM
Wonderful. Really reminds me that Christmas is on the way.
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:59:00 AM
- Christmas is approaching ..... - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2015 2:35:00 AM
You brought the Christmas spirit, dearest Anne-Lise! A seven!
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:58:00 AM
- Yes, winter has arrived :) - Enjoy your beautiful flowers - Thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)