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- Haiku X 29 - Autumn Arrives -

- Haiku on enlightenment - Time begins to slow and, as my little heart knows Autumn takes over From Autumn to Spring Birds to South took their strong wing To return again 13.08.2014 A collaboration with: Jim Horn and A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thank you for my 4th place in the contest :) - Contest Name:Haiku on Enlightenment Sponsor:Marvin Celestial Deadline : 9/11/2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2014 5:21:00 PM

this is a really nice collaboration. Congrats to you both.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2014 3:07:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/2/2014 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations Anne-Lise and Jim on a fine collaboration. Loved it

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2014 3:47:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Mark - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2014 2:53:00 PM

A wonderful collaboration many congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 3:48:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Jan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2014 6:46:00 AM

Congrats Anne Lise on ur wonderful winning haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 11:51:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit Dr. Upma - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2014 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations to both of you, Jim and Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 11:50:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit Dr.Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/1/2014 10:37:00 PM

Congratulations with much love and prayers. I love your haiku. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 1:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit Regina - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/1/2014 9:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well done Haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 1:12:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit Brenda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/20/2014 4:02:00 PM

Some people do tend to shy away from the outdoors when the weather turns cool. But, they know that a warm spring will be arriving soon.... A lovely collaboration! Good luck to you both!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/21/2014 3:00:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/17/2014 5:07:00 AM

Beautiful! I love Autumn, when all of nature dons its finest party attire.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2014 5:09:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/15/2014 7:46:00 PM

Anne Lise that is so beautiful, you must be going into your autumn, while we are going into our spring, take care my dear friend have a good weekend..............Vera............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2014 4:53:00 AM

- I love spring, Vera !!! - I will come to you ..... when autumn is here :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, dear Vera. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/15/2014 9:08:00 AM

Very nice haiku that reminds us the autumn's cool air. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 9:12:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jeremy Martin

Date: 8/15/2014 3:11:00 AM

This poem makes me long for autumn. It sings of its simple pleasures! I love the autumn air and smell of fallen leaves...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 3:46:00 AM

- My favorite season is spring,Jeremy - where all life gets a new beginning .... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/15/2014 12:02:00 AM

I love it. Happy writing and God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 3:45:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Regina. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/14/2014 10:14:00 PM

Lovely haiku Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 3:45:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

Date: 8/14/2014 2:55:00 PM

From Autumn to Spring, Birds to South took their strong wing, To return again. Jim Horn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 4:14:00 PM

- Can not find this poem about Robin Williams - Post it on your page in P-S :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 4:10:00 PM

- I've read it - a special sentence .... I can not explain it -

James Horn
Date: 8/15/2014 5:58:00 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=449735 Do me a favor. Read this and see if "Now of tears we both cry streams." A sentence or line is confusing when it lacks a subject. Other that that this is truly her best poem. Jim Horn

James Horn
Date: 8/15/2014 4:12:00 AM

Am in the process of entering another Robin Williams poem into Poetry Soup. You should be able to read it in a few minutes. Being that you are a friend now, you can read my poems at www.poetrysoup.com under name of jthorn5656 and password of soldierboy all one word in small letters. PoetrySoup should sent our poems out to everyone who has previously read one of them. Poetry Soup is great for kids as a starter for an entry into the world of poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 3:59:00 AM

- Thanks .... I post it as: A collaboration with Jim Horn and AL Andresen :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/14/2014 7:55:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely haiku Anne. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 11:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Ravi. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

Date: 8/14/2014 7:33:00 AM

Spring soon will have sprung; Find flowers among Us so we can start to see. Also, add this to your poem. We can call this a continuation poem. Jim Horn

James Horn
Date: 8/15/2014 6:08:00 AM

Autumn audacious, with all her colors galore; Spring, what is in store. Jim Horn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 11:41:00 AM

- But, this is about the autumn Jim :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/14/2014 6:11:00 AM

Yes, and it is coming way too fast. I still feel as if I never had a summer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 11:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, M.L. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/14/2014 2:41:00 AM

Oh Anne, sometimes I wish Autumn, Queen of the Seasons would last forever. I like how you give Autumn an aggressive motion. J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 3:34:00 AM

- I love spring and summer ............... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Justin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

Date: 8/13/2014 6:32:00 PM

Wonderful. autumn winter spring. your sunshine. Well done Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 3:31:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Peter. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/13/2014 5:23:00 PM

Don't be sad, my dear Sunshine: In the midst of winter, I found there was, within me, an invincible summer (Albert Camus). My Autumn and winter will be sweeter with your sunshine rays. Lovely haiku...You captured it well, my dear.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 3:30:00 AM

..... Always a little sad .... when summer sings its last verse :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, dear Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

Date: 8/13/2014 4:16:00 PM

Add this to your poem. With a trail of leaves I have learned to love so much And thrill to their touch. Go to my other last poems I have written about Robin Williams. They are all great to me and could care less about someone's opinion except Corbin's and yours. So right on and keep writing on. Jim Horn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 3:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, James/Jim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/13/2014 3:05:00 PM

Nice to touch base with you this afternoon we haven't talked in a long time, how are you doing? Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 3:12:00 PM

- Yes, long time no see .... I'm fine, hope the same for you Debbie ! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/13/2014 2:37:00 PM

really beautifully drawn picture

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 2:50:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 8/13/2014 1:54:00 PM

Yes, autumn does infect the spirit like no other. It's been a while, Anne Lise. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 2:49:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)