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the winter wears its white dress ice sculptures in many forms - allow yourself thaw horse in the stable the sled is winter ready - what an arctic adventure magical experience refreshing ice bath - it tickles in my stomach 06.12.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Triple New Charlieku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina 1st place in the contest

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Date: 1/5/2023 10:23:00 AM
I can imagine it got far below zero where you live. How is it now, Sunshine? My sister in Iowa said at one point they got minus 25 degrees. Wow, when I lived back there, it never got lower than -15
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Date: 1/5/2023 7:12:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest win. Your poem is so beautiful, Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:55:00 PM
Beautiful scene with great images. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:40:00 PM
Lovely haiku's, Anne-Lise. Brrr...making me cold (lol) Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Hugs//Charlie :)
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Date: 12/8/2022 11:48:00 AM
Sunshine Smile, This is an elegant epic suite that never strays from its intended theme. Excellent image portrayal. I appreciate your comments on my recent haiku posts. They are truly valued Howard
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 11:59:00 AM
- I love to write about nature... haiku is a perfect way to express yourself in a short version :) - hugs
Date: 12/8/2022 11:05:00 AM
Anne-Lise, the setting appears peaceful, and the Haiku set perfectly captures the fascination of the snowflakes. Good luck with the contest
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 11:55:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) -
Date: 12/7/2022 12:30:00 PM
Lovely piece of wit and whimsy, SS. ~;o)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 2:46:00 AM
- Thanks for the comment, Arlo :) - hugs
Date: 12/7/2022 6:32:00 AM
This brought a smile to my face ! I love your descriptions Anne-Lise . Really brought me to the magic cold scene . Great photo accompanying. Hugs, Susan :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 2:46:00 AM
- Thanks for the comment, Susan :) - hugs
Date: 12/7/2022 12:38:00 AM
You sure do take one there, Anne-Lise. Love the warmth of your 'far below zero' Harry
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2022 2:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Harry :) - hugs
Date: 12/6/2022 3:37:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, the temperature is far below zero. Oh too cold for me. This poem is asume! Hugs./Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/8/2022 10:44:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, sometimes winter stays too long. I am not a winter fan. Hugs./ Darlene.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2022 5:44:00 PM
- Way too cold for me too... I'm not a winter person... looking forward to spring :) - Thanks for the comment, Darlene :) - hugs
Date: 12/6/2022 2:00:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I haven't experienced this at all, and I hope at my age to not have to experience it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2022 5:41:00 PM
- You wouldn't like the cold or the short days, Sara :) - Thank you :) - hugs
Date: 12/6/2022 1:42:00 PM
The scene looks serene, Anne-Lise, and your poem evokes the beauty of snow.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2022 5:40:00 PM
- Yes, very beautiful to look at :) - Thank you, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 12/6/2022 1:17:00 PM
Hi, I don’t get to experience what you do))) Leaves still on the tress, oranges in the backyard….65 degrees out! Love the image and the Haikus…. Christmas wishes, Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/6/2022 5:51:00 PM
Wow, appreciate your honesty. Thanks. Playing Candy Jeely, Highest score 280, 800 points. First place..for awhile. Going off line…Pangir xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2022 5:38:00 PM
- Winter is long, dark and cold Pangie ... I don't like it ... great to see on photos or on Christmas cards :) - hugs
Date: 12/6/2022 11:55:00 AM
Great haiku set, Anne-Lise. Your imagery throughout is wonderful. Best wishes for the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2022 5:36:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs

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