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Corn lily was her waist Colourless and hard life Cinderella's sad eyes Castle ball ~ a sweet dream Control freak stepmother Consequence, no dancing Clock and glass shoes, remind 23/08 - 2016 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) http://www.howmanysyllables.com Each line has only 6 syllables (poem in the Pleiades form)

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/24/2016 7:41:00 AM

Oh, I love this fairy tale the best, and you've summarised it so beautifully:) glad to see it won:)congratulations:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2016 7:55:00 AM

- Many thanks Jo, for the visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/1/2016 3:30:00 PM

Wow a short version of Cinderella. Nicely done. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2016 8:02:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 2:10:00 PM

Back with congratulations and to wish you a lovely weekend, Anne Lise:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2016 2:46:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and re-visits, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/26/2016 12:40:00 PM

Anne-Lise, you did a wonderful job of condensing Cinderella into 7 short lines! I love the line "control freak stepmother" Made me laugh. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2016 12:51:00 PM

- It is not only in the fairy tales we have a "control freak stepmother" :)) - Thanks for my win Kim, nice to participate in your contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2016 3:24:00 AM

Congratulations. Corn lilies as waist, that is worth thinking about. Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2016 7:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visits, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2016 12:40:00 AM

...and back to say congrats, Anne-Lise, Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2016 7:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visits, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2016 5:32:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2016 7:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visits, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2016 9:47:00 AM

You aptly managed to summarize this fairytale using this tricky form, Anne Lise. I can visualize Cinerella with her corn lily waist! gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2016 9:51:00 AM

- Thank you for lovely visit, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 2:00:00 AM

My favorite so far Anne-Lise...probably because of being with my four year old granddaughter who loves this fairytale. I am impressed at how well you were able to include so much about the story. I loved it! I hope it is a top winner! 7 ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2016 5:07:00 AM

- All little girls love princess fairy tale :) - Thanks come from the bottom of my heart, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/24/2016 6:13:00 PM

The essence of Cinderella - nice! Good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/25/2016 5:05:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely support, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2016 11:51:00 AM

A fairytale in so few lines Anne-Lise - a unique take on Cinderella story:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 1:02:00 PM

- I am afraid that the fairy tale is too short to allow the child falls asleep :) - Thanks for your comments and visit, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/24/2016 11:41:00 AM

Wonderfully condensed, best wishes in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 1:02:00 PM

- Thank you for your lovely support, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2016 5:50:00 AM

Fantastic dear, Anne-Lise! So expressive, so precise, so beautiful. A 7 and many hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:49:00 AM

- Thanks for being so good to me - I am happy to have a person like you in my life, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/24/2016 1:45:00 AM

Very good :) good luck a winner already Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your gesture on my poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2016 12:08:00 AM

VEry unique to do Cinderella! I enjoyed this.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:54:00 AM

- Andrea, thanks for being so kind and thanks for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/23/2016 11:50:00 PM

You chose great expressive words that sum up the Cinderella story so well! Great poem, Anne Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:53:00 AM

- Laura, thanks for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/23/2016 11:20:00 PM

The whole story summed up in seven lines, nicely done, Anne-Lise. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:51:00 AM

- Thanks for being so kind and thanks for your comments, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/23/2016 9:45:00 PM

A lovely Cinderella story in Pleiades fashion from a lovely lady poet...hugs and blessings...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:48:00 AM

- Thank you for your gesture on my poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2016 7:42:00 PM

You chose a good one Sunshine....very good write...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 6:50:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely support, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/23/2016 3:42:00 PM

she finds her prince in the end, anne... superbly done!..much enjoyed with huggs and happy day-greetings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2016 3:48:00 PM

- Princess fairy tale about the time after .... And they lived happily the rest of their lives ... - Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Reed

Date: 8/23/2016 3:02:00 PM

Nice Work, Sunshine Smile! More, Please! Mike Reed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2016 3:41:00 PM

- Thank you for your lovely support, Mike - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2016 12:05:00 PM

:) Lovely reminder of how mean someone can be. Good luck in the contest, Sunshine. I always love reminder of a fairy tale. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2016 12:47:00 PM

- A dear friend is worth more than any treasure of the world, Eileen :) - Thank you for being my friend forever - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reta Pruitt

Date: 8/23/2016 11:44:00 AM

Such a concisely vulnerable look at Cinderella..I love it. May I also say that all of your work is skillful and tastefully written. Thank you. (P.S. a 7)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2016 12:42:00 PM

- Thank you for your gesture on my poem, Reta ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/23/2016 10:49:00 AM

This is fantastic Anne-Lise. How does the song go? "Fairy tales do come true, it can happen to you...." Fun stuff!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2016 12:39:00 PM

- Thanks for being so good to me - I am happy to have a person like you in my life, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/23/2016 9:02:00 AM

But despite all obstancles there was a happy ever after. Nice Pleiades Hope it does well in the contest ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2016 12:37:00 PM

- Thanks for being so kind and thanks for your comments, Casarah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)