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Don't complain about the lack of light under the stars
To write my memoirs, from a long time ago
The paradox here is that ten lines is not much

Like the sun one beautiful summer day I was born
The best foundation was a good childhood

The day I walked out the door, only seventeen
I realized that a chapter in life was over
I became "a boss" in my own new existence
and learned a lot from the phrase: "the hard school of life"

Did I mention there aren't enough lines?
 





27/09/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Story Of My Life In Ten Lines 
Sponsored by: Silent One

Poem of the Day 29/09/2019

2nd place in the contest

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Date: 10/8/2019 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Sunshine.
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Date: 10/8/2019 8:16:00 AM
- Thanks Line, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2019 5:02:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations and Love to you, Gina
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:21:00 PM
- Regina, many thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2019 5:32:00 PM
Back one more time with congrats, on your podium win, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:21:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2019 4:55:00 PM
Another congrats for you win with this beauty.
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:20:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2019 4:04:00 PM
Nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:23:00 PM
- Many thanks for my 2nd place in your contest, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2019 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:20:00 PM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2019 4:15:00 AM
Sorry missed your POTD. I really like it.can relate to you since I walked out at age 18. Found out life was no easy ride. If I ever miss a POTD of yours, please Soupmail me, Good job Panagiota
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:36:00 AM
- I forget to check p.o.t.d., me too sometimes, Panagiota ... but never too late:) - Many thanks for the visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2019 4:55:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on potd... hugs :)
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:54:00 PM
- Thanks Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 11:51:00 PM
My congratulations for your POTD, Anne Lise. Not an easy task to write a life in ten lines. Hugs.
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:53:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Anne-Lise, enjoyed!
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:53:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 7:47:00 PM
Revealing your life in only ten lines can be difficult, however- you have given us the highlights. And that is truly enough- as we can fill in the blanks. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:52:00 PM
- Thanks Brandy, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your worthy and well-deserved recognition with POTD honors. A beautiful and thoughtful poem that left me wanting more.. I love your last impactful line and I agree ten lines are not enough. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:52:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 5:37:00 PM
A unique wonderful entry deserving the honour of recognition! Congratulations on your POTD, Anne-Lise ! A great joy to read! Regards and blessings.
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:51:00 PM
- Thanks Besma, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 4:41:00 PM
I like the way you've answered this challenge. AND Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:50:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 2:55:00 PM
Great job...there are definitely not enough lines. Congrats on POTD
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:50:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 12:40:00 PM
back to offer my congratulations on your POTD my friend... hugs :)
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Date: 9/29/2019 1:57:00 PM
- Many thanks for congratulations and re-visit, my friend Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 12:26:00 PM
I totally agree....not nearly enough lines. I wanted to read more. Congratulations on your story being honored with POTD Anne-Lise! I hope this is a top winner in the contest! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/29/2019 1:56:00 PM
- More another time, Connie :) - Many thanks for the visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 12:03:00 PM
"Congratulations" on your POTD. Great job and so true. Your "the hard school of life" is so true..............................
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Date: 9/29/2019 1:54:00 PM
- Many thanks Paula, for the visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 11:43:00 AM
Anne-Lise wonderful poem and congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/29/2019 1:54:00 PM
- Many thanks for the visits and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 10:15:00 AM
… and yet, 10 lines here say so much ! "the hard school of life"... I know I went there too .. I do believe I am still a pupil. Congrats on poem of the day and best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Debra
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Date: 9/29/2019 11:59:00 AM
- Many thanks Debra, for the visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 10:10:00 AM
Well, you did a good job with your life after all! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/29/2019 11:58:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visits and congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 8:39:00 AM
Nicely written, Anne-Lise, I agree, ten lines id not enough to write about one's life. Congrats on POTD. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/29/2019 9:11:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 7:53:00 AM
Congrats Anne-Lise on poem of the day.
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Date: 9/29/2019 8:00:00 AM
- Many thanks Vijay, for visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations and re-visit, my friend Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2019 7:19:00 AM
Starting from a good foundation is always best, Congrats on POTD Anne
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:38:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visits and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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