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Maria Lynn - all messages by user

3/31/2011 7:12:42 PM
Hello Hello, I am glad to have found this site. I have read some really good work today and I plan on reading many more as time goes by. I hope to learn and grow as a writer and perhaps along the way I can give something useful to another writer. Thank you for being so welcoming so far.
Have a good night everyone
3/31/2011 7:26:02 PM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer Can you save me
Save me save me
Save Me

Lift me out of this hole
Give life to my soul
Help me find my dreams
Put an end to the screams

Can you save me
Save me save me

Breath hope into my lungs
Stop the demons from speaking in tongue
Reaching for you with all my might
I need you to hold on tight

Can you save me
Save me save me

Will you battle with the gloom
So I can step out of this tomb
Bring salvation to my spirit

I’m desperate, can’t you hear it?

Can you save me
Save me save me

In your image I need to be born again
God, can you wash away my sins
I’m on my knees begging , praying
Trying to ignore what the devil is saying

Can you save me
Save me save me

For my misdeeds I atone
All my life I thought I was alone
I realize that I was wrong
In your divine arms I belong

Can you save me
Save me save me

Oh, God I know you’re here
I give myself unto you without fear
Please Lord God save me

Can you save me
Save me save me

edited by Maria Lynn on 3/31/2011
4/6/2011 10:41:35 AM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer Thank you all for your time and critiques
@Susan Burch I wrote it as a poem, however some people think it could work as lyrics.
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