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11/14/2011 4:47:31 PM

Nicky Beaty
Posts: 4
I’ve seen you so many times
But every time I do.
It happens all over again
I fall in love with you.
Every time I see you
You put a smile on my face.
Every time I see you
My heart it starts to race.
I love the way you smile
And when you play with your hair.
I love the way you smell
And the way you always seem to care.
Your lips look so soft
Soft enough to kiss.
So when you have to go away
It’s you I always miss.
I love that your so beautiful
And to this you don‘t think true.
I guess what I’m trying to say
Is… I love you.
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