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5/13/2011 4:47:41 AM

Abigail Aye-Addo
Posts: 2
Calm spirits be me
Not that I have no mercy knee
Calm spirits be mine
Not that I was blind down the line
Or doubted how indicators align

Calm spirits be free
I did feel the urge to flee
I see impending terror somebody hear my plea
Minds are scattered scare
How do you think their hearts will fare
In this forth coming, calm spirits will me spare

Calm spirits will heal
Find how to make again beautiful real
And put hope in the hollow
Hurt, broken, destroyed please follow

In panic reign from us strife bleed
Calm spirit did constructive minds breed
Calm spirits be need
edited by dawordsmith on 5/13/2011
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1/11/2012 6:14:04 PM

Tetteh Addo
Posts: 2
deep words Smith
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2/4/2012 4:57:53 AM

Robert Ball
Posts: 15
dawordsmith wrote:
Calm spirits be me
Not that I have no mercy knee
Calm spirits be mine
Not that I was blind down the line
Or doubted how indicators align

Calm spirits be free
I did feel the urge to flee
I see impending terror somebody hear my plea
Minds are scattered scare
How do you think their hearts will fare
In this forth coming, calm spirits will me spare

Calm spirits will heal
Find how to make again beautiful real
And put hope in the hollow
Hurt, broken, destroyed please follow

In panic reign from us strife bleed
Calm spirit did constructive minds breed
Calm spirits be need
edited by dawordsmith on 5/13/2011


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Robert Ball
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2/4/2012 4:58:41 AM

Robert Ball
Posts: 15
quote=sonsofthefather]dawordsmith wrote:
Calm spirits be me
Not that I have no mercy knee
Calm spirits be mine
Not that I was blind down the line
Or doubted how indicators align

Calm spirits be free
I did feel the urge to flee
I see impending terror somebody hear my plea
Minds are scattered scare
How do you think their hearts will fare
In this forth coming, calm spirits will me spare

Calm spirits will heal
Find how to make again beautiful real
And put hope in the hollow
Hurt, broken, destroyed please follow

In panic reign from us strife bleed
Calm spirit did constructive minds breed
Calm spirits be need
edited by dawordsmith on 5/13/2011


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Robert Ball
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