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4/6/2011 2:02:06 PM

Ashley Blodgett
Posts: 5
To parish would be to gain-

Freedom. Freedom

From that which haunts me.




Not to perish in a physical sense,

No-

That would be pointless.




I must perish mentally.

Kill that which envelops my

Being. Thoughts




Of a bright future,

A better tomorrow,

A new life.
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