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4/2/2011 5:56:21 PM
Milind Padki
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Under harsh bright lights the Aluminum table tops gleam
In lieu of good conversation
He has allowed designer stubble
Bought a new green cap at
Abercrombie
In lieu of good conversation
She wears a low cut dress
Presses breasts to the table
Carries a faux smile
Fascinated by
The grilled chicken pieces on their plates
They study them closely,
Deeply.
Milind Padki
02/11/2011
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4/3/2011 1:20:07 PM
julie heckman
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I liked it. very on point.
Julie
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