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3/31/2011 10:36:29 AM

dave archuletta
Posts: 8
With a simple act of tracing my face
She had knighted my soul

Sustained - by the given of innocence and grace

With a fingertip placed on my forehead like a sword set on point
Life promises inferred
I then assured
We would both share together in acquaint
edited by Dave Archuletta on 3/31/2011
edited by Dave Archuletta on 3/31/2011
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4/1/2011 6:39:03 AM

Manouchka doreus
Posts: 23
make sure that your using the words in contxt.... i understand the last line but wld th nxt guy
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