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2/10/2011 9:44:01 PM
Desidean Rice
Posts: 4
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tied tightly to my chair
i sit and wait
losing all my hair
not feeling the hate
just what i was
what i could be
past is all a fuzz
in life i can see
where i should be
overcoming simple obstacles
in time a spectacle
if ever i saw a chance
with doubts of true happiness
i shall never dance
in the life of unfaithfulness
i could
i should
i will
i feel ill
my heart bleeds
for what i can't have
all the dirty deeds
my heart is only half
to understand my feelings
you need to know me
my everyday dealings
have brought me down to one knee
all i need is the healings
the touch
the soft voice
is that to much
should i have that choice
the comfort
the loyalty
of not worrying of what might be
just knowing
just trusting
that someone will is showing
how i can be adjusting
to nothing i have ever known
and realize the pain is real
and that i will deal...
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