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10/12/2010 5:12:24 PM

valeria iliadou
Posts: 13
GUIDANCE




Raise your senses to infinity

Like a reptile your destiny follows

Grasping from your mouth salinity

Filling with some moments your hollows.




Raise your hands in the air

As the sirens are urgently calling

Until you find the truth that you bear

Paths are chosen.Into them you are crawling.




Raise your blessings to your world

Somebody listens in the merciless night.

Our time is not getting back cause it's sold.

At least we kept our glory safe and bright!
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