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5/7/2013 7:13:54 AM

MaTia Boyd
Posts: 4
Let me pierce your soul with my tears

Let me brighten your glow with my touch

Let me burst your eardrums with my words

Let me do that to you much




Let me make your body glow so I can see it in your face

Let me make your mind think so that i can pull you on my way

Let me make you get those butterflies that I like to see fly

Let me make you smile so that inside I cant see you cry




Let me embrace you lightly as to give you no fear

Let me do it close enough but far enough away that you know I’m near

Let me send your mind on a journey that I can adventure for

Let me be your friend nothing less nothing more




Let me sing you a song that you’ve never heard

Let me write you poem, let me be that bird

Let me close your eyes, be in your dreams

Let me be your reality, for consciousness is what I feign




Let me promise to you, for those I will never break

But you can keep your heart cause sometimes I make mistakes

Let me let me let me….forever, everyday…..I’ll do anything…all you got to do is say it :-)
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