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5/3/2013 6:49:40 AM

cheung shun sang
Posts: 22
Species….
Special pleading takes their laws to go around.
Facts must needed and differ species are some with rights.
Cook the meats of dogs might good for health but wrong.
Specious china should free the Tibet when they have means to fishingisland.
Those who think that china own the fishing islands all for the seemingsame rethink by reason just to free the Tibet owning lands. Lands are differhowever reasons both is same.
Or that one should pardon fishing islands.
Pardon fishing island so as good to do is peace between china states andJapan.
Good for spectacles all upstages are laws.
China bad invader laws are bad. Just so free the Tibet states.
Laws have spectrums also must be fair.
Rules have spectrums also they must echo with loves.
If the china treats the Tibetan just as right as china peoples then keepit with coalition government. Tibetan then gets the equal politic powers. Halfto half is dues and deals.
Combine some beliefs and mixed our styles are good for counting Tibetanliving well with Chinese.
Count on men if you have needs for helps.
Counter altered just as you are seeking one for better world.
Not for china tyrants hard and soft despotic means are rights.
---------------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3-----------
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