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2/18/2013 1:51:20 PM
oli Miller
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Literally my first go.....
To those of you
who know who you are,
fait through us together
quickly pulled us apart.
A few weeks together
best memories by far
not nearly enough
a whirlwind afar.
A different time over
ending worlds apart
only left wondering
how happy you are
Who knows what the future holds,
little glimmers reflecting
in the best memories by far,
at the mercy of the second
I love from afar....
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