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12/19/2012 12:13:58 AM
Jackson Kilgrow
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a well dressed mess,
I am but a man
with a sinister past
seeking redemption.
b*tching,
ranting,
and venting,
the three verbs I tend
to utilize while writing.
because writing is my outlet,
my craved aperture,
my superlative release.
I feel the genius today.
I love every word, letter,
and line that I'm writing.
you know what though?
tomorrow I'll hate them.
I'll think this *****is worthless
as I consider deleting it all.
But I can't part with it.
like my utter inability to
forget & let go of this fading
amatory connection whose
love once gave me hope as
well as sex that left scars,
both cerebral and somatic.
I loved her so ****ing much
and if I'm being honest,
I still do
as a parting favor
I simply ask you not
to confound these
words I write with
apathy and despair.
they may sting off
the tip of my tongue
but they come from
a place that's sincere
and filled with more
than mere goodwill.
I have but a crestfallen
& despondent perspective.
This, too, will
pass with time.
or so they say.
-Jackson Kilgrow
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