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11/9/2012 8:31:33 AM
Sharon Van Buskirk
Walmart, you are the Bermuda triangle of business.
There's no way Mother Earth would've birthed something so vicious
You treat everyone that comes in your path as if they're a snail
You pour the salt, sit in your china made thrown and laugh laugh laugh
No one stays on top forever
I see the sun setting on you days of terror
If Jack from the Beanstock was real,
Instead of throwing a wedding
I'd pay him to put smash you with his foot!
edited by svlynn18 on 11/9/2012
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