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10/20/2012 9:10:57 AM
The time to vote is drawing nigh;
debates and criticisms are passing by.
I ponder now what my choices are;
two top runners show up by far.
One wishes to rule womens pants;
the other cowers to bullying tyrants.
better of two evils, is that my roster?
which one my interest would foster?
Arise the age old axom of land of the free;
how to invoke my liberty?
Out of the fodder another comes to sight;
not of the problem, but of the solution he would fight.
After introspection, Stephen Rollins gets my vote;
not a real political guy on any note.
No more swaying to and fro;
Ive made my decision thought it through high and low.
For: Rollins, Rollins, hes our man;
if he cant do it, nobody can!
...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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