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10/17/2012 2:27:03 PM
High times coming down, things are looking up;
joy and exuberances are filling my cup.
seize the day, stike the pose;
like a hot summer day spent under the hose.
Plans being fulfilled and challenges met;
trials will return, down I know I'll get.
But for now, this hour is best;
bring on the next test!
...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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