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9/20/2012 9:55:20 PM
Unless you've only got one,
Both your eyes see these words,
Are you really understanding them,
Or are they just a bunch of lettersthat make you bored?
If you're still looking then I've gotyour attention,
That's all I ask despite myimperfections,
But you don't even know about these,
I've never shown you myself,
I'm meeting you, these letters are ahuge help
How old am I?
What's the reason I'm asking this? Why?
There isn't one, does there need to be?
This is all just for fun, for you andme.
If I still have your attention thenyour a trooped.
I've rambled on for 15 lines and yourstill reading,
This is how craziness is defined
Just call me, um, the crazy ghost,
The invisible person you talk to whenyour doors are closed.
Nice to meet you,
I hope you sleep well as I do!
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