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9/18/2012 9:29:05 AM

Dia Tucker
Posts: 3
Lady Moon
on this night you are new
to shine above and you flew
Across a sky of velvet blue
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9/18/2012 6:11:54 PM

jim joyce
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very nice ..love the rhyming ))))
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10/15/2012 2:10:14 PM

jamal Abboud
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so smart and nicely done.
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