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9/5/2012 2:49:44 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
What to do with no cell phone orcomputer for a day....
Be bummed things didn't go your way?
O play outside like it's your last day?


What to do with no cell phone orcomputer for a week...
Would you keep up with friends andfamily?
Or stay home and play solitaire,indulge in your inner geek?


What to do with no cell phone orcomputer for a month...
Get in less car accidents
Have better relationships,
Gain patience,
Keep plans with those you love,
Have fewer bills,
Buy a phone book,
Buy a Camera,
Buy a CD player,
Be more creative,


Minus the styles,
If I could turn back time to the 80s,
I'd make efficiency experts eat their own greed gravy,
How much sweeter life would be.
edited by svlynn18 on 9/22/2012
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