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Nominated as one of the BEST POETS (current or in the past) on World Poetry Day, 21 March 2013 - in Dazed & Confused Magazine.

WEBSITES AND BLOGS:
1. http://suzette-poet-author.webs.com/
 
2. @ WATER DANCE (facebook page): Tips, poetry forms, self-publishing, websites, my books for sale, etc

  www.facebook.com/angelwingsa


Included in: My poem, ON THE OCEAN WAVES
International Who's Who in Poetry 2012
Library of Congress ISBN- 978-1-61936-035-8

My poem, The African Man, featured twice during 2012 in the eMagazine, Afritorial


GROOK contest finalized


Blog Posted:4/8/2013 3:17:00 AM

GROOK

MAXIMUM 10 LINE POEM



A grook ("gruk" in Danish) is a form of short aphoristic (a succinct statement expressing an opinion or general truth) poem, characterized by irony, paradox, brevity, precise use of language, sophisticated rhythms and rhymes and often satiric in nature. It was invented by the Danish poet and scientist Piet Hein. It may be found here under poetry forms on PoetrySoup and your poem must be indentified as GROOK – it will be disqualified if it is not.


Please write a grook on the SOUND of:

1.Person’s voice, eg the star from The Nanny

2.People’s squeaky shoes

3.Supermarket trolley

4.An irritating kid’s toy

5.A ticklish girlfriend

6.A bicycle needing grease

7.Etc

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A special mention: This poem by John Beam, The ACORN squeals, has many layers and it put me in mind of the movie, Ice Age. The star of the show (to my mind) was the squirrel who would risk life and limb for the acquisition of the acorn. We are much the same - risking everything and blind to the dangers, for the sake of an "acorn" which has no intrinsic value. 


The blowing pop under the wheel                                                     Crunch a
free meal seems to feel What a deal                                     No work No bill
rant just the New Squeal                                                     The dull tumbling
squirrels                                                                     The whistle of no appeal 

Ah nuts! Road kill                                                                                     ACORN


PlacePoemPoet
1Shoe Talk
yasmin khan

1The ACORN squeals
John Beam

1America's Idle Pastime
Andrea Dietrich

2Bird Lip Grook
David Fisher

2Squeaky Wheel
Russell Sivey

2Aggravated by Squeaks
Connie Gildersleeve

3Gotta Run Down to the Store -
Tim Ryerson

47 etc
Joyce Johnson

4What a Snafu
Annalise Brigham

5The Tree Frog
Sara Kendrick

6MY KNOCKING ENGINE
olusegun Arowolo

7greaze
EBRAHIM SHARIFAT

8Who's In Charge
Carrie Richards

9What's that Hum I Hear
Reason A. Poteet

10Text Mad
jack horne

Honorable MentionClap Trap
Debbie Guzzi

Honorable MentionAH, SQUEAKY,SQUEAKY SHOES
Andrew Crisci

Honorable MentionMaybe Next Time
Barbara Gorelick


Thank you Soupers who had entered. I had chiefly concentrated on the rhyming scheme and how the annoying sound you wished to portray, was successfully imparted via your poem. 


CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS!


Link shared on my fb page, Water Dance: 

https://www.facebook.com/angelwingsa


HAPPY QUILLS!

Su


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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Congratulations to all the winners!!

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:34:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations to the winners and to you dear friend Su for sponsoring this wonderful contest which is quite hard for me-that's one of the reasons of being late in the entry ;) & after I've read the winning pieces, I still doubt if mine is correct ;)). I hope I can try again next time. AGain, congratulations! love and hugs, Leonora

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 7:39:00 AM
    SUz, thanks for this contest and for my win. I really enjoyed reading all the grooks being posted this past month!! congrats to all.

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    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 4/8/2013 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are welcome, Andrea. There were many fine entries - these are my favourites. But, it does not detract from the many talented poets we have here on Soup. I loved your Grook as I have a Love/Hate relationship with talent contests :-)

My Past Blog Posts

 
Goodbye Soupers - with Omar Khayyam
Date Posted: 5/19/2013 1:42:00 AM
THAT'S WHAT YOU MEANT TO ME
Date Posted: 5/17/2013 5:18:00 AM
Happy Mother's Day
Date Posted: 5/11/2013 3:06:00 PM
PARADISE LOST results
Date Posted: 5/11/2013 1:09:00 AM
The Gag Factor
Date Posted: 5/10/2013 9:15:00 AM
My Perspective ...
Date Posted: 5/7/2013 1:39:00 AM
The Face of PoetrySoup
Date Posted: 5/6/2013 2:42:00 PM
ROUNDEL CONTEST UPDATE
Date Posted: 5/5/2013 3:20:00 PM
America's first settlers resorted to cannibalism
Date Posted: 5/3/2013 10:58:00 PM
HAPPY MAY DAY
Date Posted: 5/1/2013 2:03:00 AM
I DID IT MY WAY
Date Posted: 4/30/2013 10:17:00 PM
MOST AWFUL by Caleb Smith
Date Posted: 4/25/2013 12:35:00 PM
WORLD BOOK DAY, 23 April - Birth and Death of Shakespeare
Date Posted: 4/23/2013 3:16:00 AM
You are what you read - ROUNDEL CONTEST UPDATE
Date Posted: 4/22/2013 1:43:00 AM
GOLDEN AUTUMN
Date Posted: 4/19/2013 4:00:00 AM
DON'T ANALYSE IT, DON'T ASK OTHERS TO ANALYSE IT
Date Posted: 4/18/2013 1:09:00 AM
Suzanne Delaney and Suzette Crous
Date Posted: 4/11/2013 1:28:00 AM
ROUNDEL - PARADISE LOST
Date Posted: 4/8/2013 8:02:00 AM
GROOK contest finalized
Date Posted: 4/8/2013 3:17:00 AM
Suzette Poet and Author - new website
Date Posted: 4/7/2013 2:17:00 AM
GIBBETING
Date Posted: 4/5/2013 1:34:00 AM
Goodbye
Date Posted: 4/3/2013 2:49:00 PM
INFLUENCES ON OUR POETRY
Date Posted: 3/31/2013 11:44:00 PM
WHO IS THE POET? - No 4 - EASTER EGG HUNT - So far - - -
Date Posted: 3/30/2013 12:49:00 AM
WHO IS THE POET? - No 4 - EASTER EGG HUNT
Date Posted: 3/28/2013 12:26:00 AM

My Poems

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Date PostedPoem TitleFormCategories
9/15/2014I HAD A DREAM ---Terzanelleabuse,
8/19/2014FootleFootlehumor,humorous,
8/11/2014LIFE'S A CLICHECoupletlife,
7/28/2014COLLATERAL DAMAGERhymechild,children,death,
7/27/2014If God is walking by our sideCoupletdaughter,
7/25/2014FREE FROM MOOD Blitzintrospection,
7/24/2014Language, per se - LGTCoupletlanguage,
7/22/2014TimeSuzette Primedeath,life,philosophy,
7/6/2014IN THE FORESTVerseafrica,allegory,baby,natu
7/2/2014WHEN THE FINAL BELL TOLLS - Inspired by the RUBAIYAT, of Omar KhayyamRhymephilosophy,
6/16/2014WINTERHaikuallegory,seasons,winter,
6/7/2014SIJO meets COUNTRY and WESTERNSijolonely,longing,lost love,
5/25/2014moths flitMonokuanalogy,nature,
5/23/2014Not haikuSenryuanalogy,humor,humorous,
5/22/2014HEADNOTEHaikuhistory,poetry,
5/18/2014IN SILENCE LAYS THE ANSWERSonnetallegory,philosophy,poets
5/13/2014the cherry blossomHaikuspring,
5/13/2014BRIDGE TOO FARVersemythology,
5/11/2014HAPPY MOTHER'S DAYTankamothers day,
5/5/2014tears of this veldSijohero,longing,memory,natur
5/5/2014TO A NUNNERY, GOFree versemarriage,men,women,
5/5/2014scorpion Haikunature,
4/14/2014DESMOND MPILO TUTU - Itty Bitty poemClerihewhumorous,
3/31/2014SWEET TASTE OF LOVE In memory of Linda-marie Sweet-heartSuzette Primebereavement,death,dedicat
3/27/2014CHAOS - SUZETTE PRIMESuzette Primephilosophy,
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My Photos


Fav Poems

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Poem TitleFormCategories
As Raindrops FallLyriclife,love,philosophy,visi
The Shadow of MeFree verseintrospectionme,age,old,t
As Canvas WeepsTankaart
Through the Winter Cold he Rode Villanellelove,winter,
Seasons to wonderRhymenature,seasons,me,winter,
The Loss of WisdomQuaternintrospection,loss,people
Autumn LoveAcrosticlove,
PseudonymFree verseallegory,hope,introspecti
swarm of dragonfliesHaikuart,nature,
Dying RoseHaikudevotion,
Jokers LamentSenryufunny,life,
Distant Thunder - A Shan-zi PoemFree versenature,
Captive Bird - 12 Bars 12 DreamsRhymeanimals,
'Peace when needed'Free versefriendship,hope,life,lost
Wearied WanderlustRondeaulove,
The Allure of Your LipsQuaternpassion,romance,visionary
'Warfare'Verseangst,depression,fear,
Invitation to the DanceFree verseallegory,
TUNES OF WAVESRhymemusic,nature,ocean,
Beauty of NatureHaikunature,
Do You RememberFree verselost lovetime,
Nette Onclaud, Princess to be QueenQuatrainhistory,people,places
DARE WEQuatrainfunny,me,
Wayward ChildPantoumage,dark,introspection,li
Ewmer Fudd and Buggs Bunny Paint the Town WedCoupletfunny,life,
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Fav Poets

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Debbie Guzzi United States Flag United States Read
Ruben O. Argentina Flag Argentina Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Connie Marcum Wong United States Flag United States Read
Robert L. Hinshaw United States Flag United States Read
harry horsman United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Wilma Neels South Africa Flag South Africa Read
nette onclaud Philippines Flag Philippines Read
kash poet India Flag India Read
Robert Ludden United States Flag United States Read
Rhonda Johnson-Saunders United States Flag United States Read
Leonora Galinta Thailand Flag Thailand Read
Erich Goller United States Flag United States Read
Joann Grisetti United States Flag United States Read
Jenna-Nichole Conrad United States Flag United States Read
Terry O'Leary France Flag France Read
Vicky Tsiluma Kenya Flag Kenya Read
Irfana Ali Bhat India Flag India Read
Justin Bordner United States Flag United States Read
Sara Giroux United States Flag United States Read
Sharon Smith United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Richard Lamoureux Canada Flag Canada Read
Debra Squyres United States Flag United States Read
James Fraser United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
James Nichols United States Flag United States Read
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