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Blog Posted:2/6/2013 11:45:00 PM
Basho 

An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.

Autumn moonlight—
a worm digs silently
into the chestnut.

Lightning flash—
what I thought were faces
are plumes of pampas grass.

Yosa Buson

A summer river being crossed
how pleasing
with sandals in my hands!

Light of the moon
Moves west, flowers' shadows
Creep eastward.

In the moonlight,
The color and scent of the wisteria
Seems far away.

Kobayaski Issa

O snail
Climb Mount Fuji,
But slowly, slowly!

Trusting the Buddha, good and bad,
I bid farewell
To the departing year.

Everything I touch
with tenderness, alas,
pricks like a bramble.

Natsume Soseki

Over the wintry
forest, winds howl in rage
with no leaves to blow.

The crow has flown away:
swaying in the evening sun,
a leafless tree.

Recent Poems

In the coolness
of the empty sixth-month sky...
the cuckoo’s cry. - Masaoka Shiki

Whitecaps on the bay:
A broken signboard banging
In the April wind. - Richard Wright

Lily:
out of the water
out of itself - Nick Virgilio

ground squirrel
balancing its tomato
on the garden fence - Don Eulert

As the wind does blow
Across the trees, I see the
Buds blooming in May

I walk across sand
And find myself blistering
In the hot, hot heat

Falling to the ground,
I watch a leaf settle down
In a bed of brown.

It’s cold—and I wait
For someone to shelter me
And take me from here.

I hear crackling
Crunch, of today’s new found day
And know it won’t last

Falling to the ground,
I watch a leaf settle down
In a bed of brown.

A cricket disturbed
the sleeping child; on the porch
a man smoked and smiled.

I'm turning over
look out and give me room there
you cricket, you.

Remember, haiku is more than a type of poem; it is a way of looking at the very nature of existence.
http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-haiku-poems.html

How NOT to write haiku:
My, Suzette Gazette's, resent pathetic efforts which don't wow or hold a punch! 

licking honey off
my fingers tips –
stiff joints

virgin green buds
on the bare stems -
pruned rose bushes

old church bells chime
in the late afternoon air –
a summer bride

These 3 "haiku" are included in the haibun, Summer Bride, which I wrote just for fun - not contest entry. 

HAPPY QUILLS!





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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:10:00 AM
    Interesting Su, BTW I like your Haiku

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    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 2/7/2013 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Craig. :-)
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:00:00 AM
    So true, the way the haiku poets looked at nature was as an outgrowth of God, they were primarily Shinto Buddhists. Alot of the differences in english rewrites of ancient or modern haiku come from the choice of translator. Japanese is a tonal language, so reading what is written outloud IN Japanese can change the meaning of the write through intonation alone.

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    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 2/7/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Debbie, for the input - I am learning something new every day. I did not know that the translations made such a difirence. Love, Su
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/7/2013 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haiku is not capitalized [except for proper nouns] or punctuated as a sentence because it is meant to be a 'snippet' NOT a complete thought, open to the reader mind. The reader may write/make/concieve the moment before and the moment after THAT'S why you don't use a period because the is NO BEGINNING or end to creation
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/7/2013 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Basho frog haiku alone has perhaps 100's of slightly different translations. And there are actual 'content' reasons for not capiatlizing or punctuating which is often done by English writer coming from old school poetry formate of capitalizing the first word of every line.

My Past Blog Posts

 
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I DID IT MY WAY
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WORLD BOOK DAY, 23 April - Birth and Death of Shakespeare
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GOLDEN AUTUMN
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DON'T ANALYSE IT, DON'T ASK OTHERS TO ANALYSE IT
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ROUNDEL - PARADISE LOST
Date Posted: 4/8/2013 8:02:00 AM
GROOK contest finalized
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Suzette Poet and Author - new website
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GIBBETING
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Goodbye
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INFLUENCES ON OUR POETRY
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WHO IS THE POET? - No 4 - EASTER EGG HUNT - So far - - -
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11/24/2014 CHRISTMAS TREE POETRY Concretechristmas,poetry,
11/2/2014 GENTLE CARE Tail-rhymeangel,bible,care,health,i
11/2/2014 PETRICHOR Versehow i feel,nature,passion
10/26/2014 WHERE DO BIRDS GO WHEN THEY DIE Free versebible,fantasy,lost love,s
10/25/2014 Mother's Chicken Pie Epulaeryufood,
10/22/2014 MASSACRE OF MINEWORKERS Versedeath,
10/19/2014 Cagn Tankaafrica,animal,god,nature,
10/19/2014 GARDEN TABLEAU Versenature,
9/15/2014 I HAD A DREAM --- Terzanelleabuse,
8/19/2014 AN ALLEY CAT Footlehumor,humorous,
8/11/2014 LIFE'S A CLICHE Coupletlife,
7/28/2014 COLLATERAL DAMAGE Rhymechild,children,death,
7/27/2014 If God is walking by our side Coupletdaughter,
7/25/2014 FREE FROM MOOD Blitzintrospection,
7/24/2014 Language, per se - LGT Coupletlanguage,
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7/6/2014 IN THE FOREST Verseafrica,allegory,baby,natu
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6/16/2014 WINTER Haikuallegory,seasons,winter,
6/7/2014 SIJO meets COUNTRY and WESTERN Sijolonely,longing,lost love,
5/25/2014 moths flit Monokuanalogy,nature,
5/23/2014 Not haiku Senryuanalogy,humor,humorous,
5/22/2014 HEADNOTE Haikuhistory,poetry,
5/18/2014 IN SILENCE LAYS THE ANSWER Sonnetallegory,philosophy,poets
5/13/2014 the cherry blossom Haikuspring,
5/13/2014 BRIDGE TOO FAR Versemythology,
5/11/2014 HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY Tankamothers day,
5/5/2014 tears of this veld Sijohero,longing,memory,natur
5/5/2014 TO A NUNNERY, GO Free versemarriage,men,women,
5/5/2014 scorpion Haikunature,
4/14/2014 DESMOND MPILO TUTU - Itty Bitty poem Clerihewhumorous,
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3/21/2014 arthritis Tankaage,family,mother daughte
3/14/2014 THE DATE Rhymelove,marriage,
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7/25/2013 SUZETTE PRIME Footlepoetry,
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7/19/2013 Et in Arcadia ego Rhymewife,wisdom,woman,women,
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7/15/2013 Crocodile Kentucky Limerickfood,humor,humorous,
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7/3/2013 MILDEWED EXPECTATIONS Free verseheartbroken,son,
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6/29/2013 CHAOS Free versephilosophy,
6/29/2013 THE FOUNDLINGS Rhyme royalanimal,child,joy,youth,
6/23/2013 Amber Sijometaphor,nature,philosoph
5/4/2013 A Twisted Tree Haikunature,philosophy,
5/1/2013 RUSH Versenature,
4/26/2013 TYPEWRITER Narrativenostalgia,
4/20/2013 What is in a Name Coupletfamily,,granddaughter,
4/19/2013 Gray Haikubeach,
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4/9/2013 The Tree of Knowledge Versephilosophy,religious,tree
4/9/2013 WHITE ROSES Tankawedding,
4/9/2013 TABLE MOUNTAIN Quintellaafrica,dedication,nature,
4/5/2013 The Hike Haikunature,
3/31/2013 ALBATROSS and PRECIOUS GOLD Quaternallegory,introspection,me
3/28/2013 T Woods Limerickhumorous,satire,
3/24/2013 QUANTUM PHYSICS Abecedarianscience,
3/22/2013 AFRIKAANS and ENGLISH TANKA Tankaintrospection,
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3/14/2013 REREDOS Tankaautumn,metaphor,passion,r
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2/22/2013 INNOCENCE Verseinspirational,
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2/16/2013 A Blue Tit Monokunature,
2/16/2013 Steps Haikunature,winter,
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2/7/2013 The Shambles, York Kimohistory,time,winter,
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My Photos


Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
As Raindrops Fall Lyriclife,love,philosophy,visi
The Shadow of Me Free verseintrospectionme,age,old,t
As Canvas Weeps Tankaart
Through the Winter Cold he Rode Villanellelove,winter,
Seasons to wonder Rhymenature,seasons,me,winter,
The Loss of Wisdom Quaternintrospection,loss,people
Autumn Love Acrosticlove,
Pseudonym Free verseallegory,hope,introspecti
swarm of dragonflies Haikuart,nature,
Dying Rose Haikudevotion,
Jokers Lament Senryufunny,life,
Distant Thunder - A Shan-zi Poem Free versenature,
Captive Bird - 12 Bars 12 Dreams Rhyme 
'Peace when needed' Free versefriendship,hope,life,lost
Wearied Wanderlust Rondeaulove,
The Allure of Your Lips Quaternpassion,romance,visionary
'Warfare' Verseangst,depression,fear,
Invitation to the Dance Free verseallegory,
TUNES OF WAVES Rhymemusic,nature,ocean,
Beauty of Nature Haikunature,
DARE WE Quatrainfunny,me,
Wayward Child Pantoumage,dark,introspection,li
Do You Remember Free verse 
Nette Onclaud, Princess to be Queen Quatrainhistory,people,places
Ewmer Fudd and Buggs Bunny Paint the Town Wed Coupletfunny,life,
Yesterdays Free verseangst,
When Tomorrow Dawns Verselife,garden,
paper boat Haikuhope,
The Ivy and The Brick Villanelleallegory,heart,red,heart,
Haste Quintain (Sicilian)faith,fear,introspection,
Crickets' Call Rhymenature,time,love,
Dream of Dawn Constanza Rhymenostalgia,flower,flower,r
Drawing on Time Versededication,faith,life,may
MY QUIET PLACE, SOFT Versespace,
Shadow Puppets Verselove,
The Greatest Love Story Quatrainlove,words,body,love,
After my death Epigramsad,
Her Epitaph Epigramdeath,nostalgia,
Between the Stingers Villanellelost love,
Phobia Free verseangst,world,light,light,
Let the Moon Watch Tankaromance,
The Zulu Coconut Speaks Nonetallegory,
Dark Dawn Diamantepolitical,
Injustice Versedeath,friendship,history,
The Ballad Of Prospector Pete Balladfunny,
Ramblers Rhymefantasy,love,
Under Moonlight Tankalost love,
In My Prime Free versephilosophy,me,change,me,
Positano Harbor Dodoitsusea,
Hymns of Salvation 1 Suzette Primebirth,me,philosophy,relig
A Seagull's Plight Free versecourage,dream,passion,upl
Imaginary Universe Free verseimagination,philosophy,
Sweet Taste of Love Suzette Primelost love,
I AM LIVING Free versededication,devotion,inspi
Caught in the Sun Quintellabeauty,nature,
Stardust Artist Coupletbeauty,imagination,nature
Never Forgotten Coupletdevotion,love,
A valentine poem 1 Acrosticlove,valentines day,words
In Dawn's Bright Glow Sonnetnature,
Poe and I Rispettolonely,lost love,
The Magpie and The Butterfly, A Terzanelle Terzanellebutterfly,love,marriage,p
Picture Postcard Free versenature,winter,
Your Ocean Free verseintrospection,
Past Passion Sonnetlost love,love,
It's All In How You Ask It Footlefunny,
Senryu 023 Senryuloss,
Table for One Ekphrasis (Ecphrasis)artautumn,lonely,morning,
The Mighty One Ekphrasis (Ecphrasis)natural disasters
Closer Free versehope,life,love,peace,blue
My Slutty Aunt's Wedding Rhymesatire,wedding,wedding,
Amassed ABCangst,nature,war,
Cling Sijoautumn,insect,nature,rain
THE RESTLESS SEA historical quatrain for contest Quatrainhistory,men,
The Accolade Balladchristian,faith,love,woma
Chilled Dawn Versedark,death,farewell,loss,
The 'Undred an' Fifth Rhymeadventure,courage,war,mar
The Angel Inside Rhymeallegory,angel,art,beauti
Erin Go Bragh Couplethistory,life,people,place
More Foolish Footles for Super Soupy Soupers - Footlefunny,me,
Lekker contest Acrostichappiness,love,marriage,
A Near Death Experience of A Sweetheart Rhymedeath,death,god,death,god
Colours Coupletnature,
SMAAK STUKKEND Carpe Diemimagination,introspection
Sitting In My Deck Chair Free versehappiness,happy,nature,dr
A Bit O' Ireland Quatrainlove,time,time,
A Pink Crystal Dawn Kimonature,
Bartered Wives Versehistory,
The Potter's Wheel Sestinaart,life,
Kiss the Rain Sonnetlost love,
HOW TO STOP SWIFT AND STEALTHY TIME THAT BRINGS DEATH Carpe Diemdeath,history,life,philos
A is for Antenna 1 ABCscience,
Dance With Me Free versedance,music,
America's Idle Pastime Grookfunny,
PALADIN Free versepeople,sympathy,
Salvation comes with a far greater sacrifice than blind faith and car-wash fundraisers Prose Poetryfaith,hope,life,social,ba
The Solo Dancer - Tanka to Sonnet Sonnetbeautiful,tree,sun,tree,
In Good Conscience Sonnetintrospection,sound,sound
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Every now and then Lyriclove,miss you,
Daytime's Demeanor Rhyme royalbeauty,life,nature,water,

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harry horsman United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Wilma Neels South Africa Flag South Africa Read
nette onclaud Philippines Flag Philippines Read
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Robert Ludden United States Flag United States Read
Rhonda Johnson-Saunders United States Flag United States Read
Leonora Galinta Thailand Flag Thailand Read
Erich Goller United States Flag United States Read
Joann Grisetti United States Flag United States Read
Jenna-Nichole Conrad United States Flag United States Read
Terry O'Leary France Flag France Read
Vicky Tsiluma Kenya Flag Kenya Read
Irfana Ali Bhat India Flag India Read
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Sara Giroux United States Flag United States Read
Sharon Smith United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
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