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WARRIORS COME OUT AND PLAAYAY


Blog Posted:10/24/2012 12:03:00 AM
For those who like to slam! For those quick and witty, sly tongue braveheart's, who like to manipulate the art, would somebody please start......FOR FUN, BUT COME WITH IT!
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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 6:07:00 AM
    Wow, Sha'ntez is the real deal, awesome job!!

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/25/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea he is, as well as the rest who participated!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:39:00 PM
    With all the verses that's in this blog, we would've completed about 3 or 4 songs! I had a ball! Thanks to all the participants, for the fun and laughter! God Bless!

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:59:00 PM
    You're in Memphis?

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...I'm married, so I don't mess around. Been with my wife almost 24 yrs
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    please believe it but they interesting here to
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know u miss the women in cali?
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I used to live in pasadena and sacramento got alot of fam in sac
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The toy is my 89 CadillacBrougham, on feet, with beat! I pull it out on Sunday's, and feel young again lol!
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I bet it is! I pulled my toy yesterday and rolled all through l.a., Compton, watts, long beach, and the far West side; Venice beach and Santa Monica... I started a piece about everything I took in. I have to pg 13 it up to post it!...I love in the suburbs now, couple of doors down is the Grand Wizard, and a lot of other nationalities! The Hood will always be home!
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    junes a good time im not sure where lake charles is but new orleans is wild sometimes i have to step back and just think "this is really happening" lol its a writers paradise
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We leaving L.A. with like a 40 car or more caravan...I'm going to act a fool!
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have some folks out there, and never been. We having a family reunion in june, I think its called lake Charles
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    used to be but I moved to new orleans a couple months ago
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Eightball n MJG out there!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:36:00 PM
    You be david I'll be the sling he trusted/you be samson Im the hair delilah lusted/just a instrument that holds a strong note/seeking brilliance so someone might quote

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oooohwwe....I just got done with the grass!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:26:00 PM
    A warrior like King David, plenty blood on these hands/ the predicament is one of us, its a race to a dead man/ repeatedly crossing the finish line/ not always on my feet, I almost gave up mine/ real cats have lives, in multiples of nine

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:14:00 PM
    I carry my cross but remain burdenless/mind lost in uncertainness/tryin to hold my sanity but much turbulence/witnessed to many domestic disturbances/only weekends get some church in this/so daily Im deservin this

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:03:00 PM
    Im the general my orders leave em breathless/never critical my bullets go head then headrest/Thats dead then exit red armrest/misled but respect the distressed

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's right, the writer gets paid more! So u thinking right
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I play on the mic sometimes but Im a writer not a voice these rappers entertain I teach I got a couple students with nice delivery but lack of creativity so Im a paint the pictures and let them carry the canvas
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I go through their weekly, teaching him some things! I'll spit flames til my eternal rest!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:00:00 PM
    Finger signs will have me ringing nine's/ automatically enemies if you're not one of mine/ warriors breed them to play ruff/ the grave is full of folk who play tough/ Babylon is not for the weak/ there are laws in place to crucify the meek

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:51:00 PM
    They out here jabbin Im a tyson uppercut/Im into loud smashin they makin noise somewhat/I stand and deliver patron shots no liver/they stand there and quiver while I eat they dinner

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sha' ntez taking me back to my twenties and teens! I love your spirit babyboy.....when you coming to cali, my folks still have a studio; I sold mine, but have access whenever I need it!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:51:00 PM
    I have a verbal gatlin with battery acid dips/ doctor's hands are feeble if you take that hit/ hot water and bleach cleanses my powder burns/ you walked out the house but returned in a urn

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:41:00 PM
    My feast regurgitated from the belly of the beast/ my life was marinated in the streets/ a chalked outline upon the concrete/ from blood loss your finally petite

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:22:00 PM
    I tote a verbal pistol dues paid no rentals/hiccup a silent missile incinerate ya mentals/leave damages from los angeles to vegas/need savages to handle this cat he courageous

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    They both fire!....round 2
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:11:00 PM
    The lion arrives to much jungle to roam/couldnt be contained in a phil jackson zone/papas stone was rollin but never found its way home/so im the sensei and student no bricks brake bones

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:13:00 PM
    Well you got me remembering those bottles clanking together "warriors come out and playyyyyy". Lol.

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That movie is a classic! The warriors did it! Lol
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:38:00 PM
    lol--just back from work but gotta go till tomorrow or my girlfriend ( wife) will do a Scribish things to me --so truce for now-----btw where's Sha'ntz and Vicky--they'll kick butt here---tomorrow afternoon

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes sir!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:09:00 PM
    this sounds like fun but i can't be rude or crude and i don't think fast i'm much better at putting down myself anyone else is safe -crowns to all the queens.

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:36:00 PM
    To late to the party scribe, got snipped when you were kickin the slats from yur crib like a crazy child/ while I was bell bottom styled so I could beguile yur girl PD and that wild chick did smile/Who got the crown now while you be whaaain with Ruben

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL....Craig in attack mode! I like it..
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:20:00 PM
    I had to tell one of My Trolls it wasn't polite to slam the mailman the other day... And he was still limping as he went off.... LOL Bad Troll! Bad Troll!

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hazard pay?
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Believe me, I dont wanna be rude / but someone's talking about lube / if there's a party, do not exclude / at least let me take a ----! Waaaaa hahhhahahha!

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The things that excite you...lol
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:51:00 PM
    I’m the poet destroyer, and you can’t win.. Playing with me is like playing with fire, making me your biggest sin. Here, you go Scribe-e, T-O-S-S* T-O-S-S, all my scraps belong in the recycle bin.

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Take care PD!
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Okay, I have to go for a bit… I had fun rhyming and slamming Mr Doolittle’s brain…
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Scribe, Marlon, , I don’t know where or how to begin. A shower for you my poetry friend. The only foreplay I want to do with you.. Involves a donkeys tail, now spread it and open wide…..

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why sling dirt when we can sling mud/ you picked up your dude at a gay club in a tub with some bubs/ real men is what you dream of/ you have missing mascara, then he has it/ he's out the closet on your wedding day, how tragic
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    NO... JUST A PIN
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No vaseline or nothing...that's harsh lol
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:38:00 PM
    Ruben you are hilarious...Lmao

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Warriors stay on the offense/ you spit bars, I spit coffins/ embalming fluid cocktails ascend from my tongue/ I rather fall upon a blade before I lose one/ dishonor is a welcome mat for death/ scribe the dragon breathes fire while you lizards blow breath

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    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    EPIC...
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Craig I don't wait on the crown, I'll take mine/ I'll align nine in your spine from a tech nine/ the hairpin marksman with the hands Budded/ castration will leave you de-studded

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Sharpening my skills with a little horse play/ here's an invitation PD, Nathan can watch us foreplay/ Ha ha/ I'm forever on some Ra Ra/ you gotta admit that was funny/ does he know I'm the butterflies in your tummy/ stay tune for the episode of cheaters/ for this affair that sizzle like fajitas

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    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/24/2012 1:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WWWwwwaaa hahaahhahahha!
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes ma'am...lol
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    mmmm did you say fajitas... LOL
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:57:00 PM
    Look look around /the stompin feet make no sound /screamin at the trampled ground/cuz the man ain't been crowned /listen listen what you sayin /man, you been prayin /stayin down waitin /get up, get you up and lay in the rebound

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    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/24/2012 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Holly cow!! I wasnt expecting this!! What are you doing, Craig!! : )
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Craig, I don’t need any high tech grammar,, My poetry alone will smash in your face, with words that hit like a hammer. I’m going to take this pen, and twist it till you go insane,,,, I’m going to carve my name all over the crown you found..
    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 10/24/2012 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yo, be easy on the rookie PDmeister ! lol
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    off with his head... LOL
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Craig, you have me laughing too hard...whoa u surprised me!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:48:00 PM
    I'm back from the store with a fresh can of whoop ass/ sautee-ing Poet Destroyers in cook class/ too old to be tender/ Linda/ take ODF the thinking cap and surrender

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Too funny
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My spit and drool can slam better than you CAN. I’m going to take your whoop-ass CAN and add it to my collection of CANS
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...
    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awe,,, this rebel wants to play with me.. Can’t you see, I'm the slamming queen and I never surrender easily. You can play jester, you already know your place, SO! Do what good fools do, and stay out of my face.
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Off*
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Sorry that it’s taken me a while, I feel all of you waiting for my foot in front of your computers doggy style. Everyone pick up your slams their making me sick Nothing you write can outwit this kiss I’m sealing with a sexy lick.

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I like dat...
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:21:00 PM
    hi...hi...just got out of work..... weeeeeeeeee....my kind of blog... hold on I'll be back...... pd

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    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you...
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You know I'm waiting on you! I read your slams last night and woke up inspired! Where you go PD!
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/24/2012 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was introducing you! : )
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:18:00 PM
    Listen to me, little Bat-man-toy / and you too, Mr. Lover boy / She's reading your babbling with joy / her current silent, just a decoy. .............. : P

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    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha...thank you Ruben////
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Are there any rules, or guidelines on how to do this? How often does a rhyme come up? Some of these had a rythm and other did not. I want to play, but never have seen it before. Does spelling count or speed?

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not really, just be intellectually rude, it's all in fun Joann! Rhyme makes it a lil interesting, but not necessary! Cmon give us one!
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/24/2012 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have no idea! LOL!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:38:00 AM
    Hi Scribe, this was my first ever participation in slam. You should do it more often and offer some pointers and perhaps some of us can pick up some skills. Then the games can truly begin. Thanks for this!

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Vicky, its not a certain way to do it! Just need a little sarcasm, mixed with wit, and everyone is your enemy! The rhyming is done by choice, I prefer to rhyme, slant rhyme etc. It's a personal attack, without curse words, or intent to hurt anyone!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:21:00 AM
    Bully with different strokes here comes the guche/pit bull with leash broke I shake a pooch/filet mignon on foam plate this aint no arena/I get it on at any rate make you a believa

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aight....that's hot!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:20:00 AM
    I'll be back, have to make a run to th e grocery store...

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:14:00 AM
    I'm in my 40's so I'm spitting from retirement/ can u imagine what I was like when I was aspiring/ fellas hated me but the ladies admiring/ verbal gymnastics, straight to the mattress to get her perspir-ing

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:06:00 AM
    I Come to the battle with coroner/ and more elusive than the language of a foreigner/ the serpent that spews acid venom/ that neutralizes that talent in them

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Ruben you cool But Im still a savage vampire/My bite leaves blood pools aint no tale for a campfire/Transform but no wings scorpion tail deadly sting/abusive my swing they all run from the ring

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:58:00 AM
    POET DESTROYER, COME OUT AND PLAAYAY...DO U HEAR THE BOTTLES CLICKING! LOL CMON BABYGURL...

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:52:00 AM
    We raise our snipers from diapers/ kamikaze life lifers/ and the manual was written with the blood from this cipher/ y'all not hyper/ energetic poot butts/ more lynches under my belt than the Ky Klux

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Un Hunh, yes sir, the way I love it!
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its gettin warm in here
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ku*
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:51:00 AM
    Who runs this blah-blah Grand Prix? / What's his name? Where's his I.D.? / To learn Slam, group of trainee, / Call Mrs. Linda, known as P.D...............Waaaaaaaa hahhaha! I dont know what im doing!

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    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/24/2012 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Queen,, VICKY,,,, LOL... scribe,, MY SIS... DOES NOT SLAM... OKAY... JUST ONE TIME.. SHE SLAMMED ME ON THE FLOOR...
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I took her title!
    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/24/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LoL Ruben! And where's PD?, I heard she's the King of Slam!
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 10/24/2012 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : P
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was good Ruben...I like it!
    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD, our sis? She don't want none! Lol go get her!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:41:00 AM
    They shake hands with downward eyes those fingers lie/So when they land glue stuck like flies them haters die/I command a army of loyalists we dont break stride/I demand a better florist yall better hide

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oooohwee
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:39:00 AM
    To murder the Scribe you gotta bring a clan witcha/ the outcome, a family headshot is the picture/ red dots not related to Indians/ Mark of the Scribe, they'll know it's him again

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:28:00 AM
    Just 'cause it's been rained on/you mistake a tiger for a cat/you should have done your bio homework/instead of cramming lines from wak jams/

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I like the the tiger for a cat!..I gotta cook up another!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:24:00 AM
    I'm idolized like the cross not the one upon it/ ciphers are chances for me to murk by the hundreds/ genocidal bars out the shell to be plagues/ and more explosive than powdered kegs

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Half on a baby had two still unwhole/shakin my head so hard loosened skull/bendin for life but breakin no rules/lost my mental knife a butcher with no tools

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Shantez be spitting....
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:59:00 AM
    hot rhymes skin alive call em anatomy's upholstery/got nines to test drive so trail blazin with weaponry/cold steel squeeze waistline exercise with a purpose/Im still on they mind bet I leave em alertless

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:55:00 AM
    Don't let no beef mature, you slaughter at veal/ the barber has changed occupation to the butcher of Seville/ a doctorate degree in Jeffrey Dahmer/ with his genetics mixed with my performer

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:38:00 AM
    Hit em with raw lyrics look ma no hands/separate mind from spirit soul left bland/Im cuttin up on a mic the mouthpiece butcher/pullin pranks to excite like ashton kutcher

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lmao burner...the butcher
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:34:00 AM
    This is just for fun! Cmon slammers and lyricist....let's play...

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:29:00 AM
    My lines are like Mercury Tipped Hollow's/ spit 2 at a time the 2nd is trained to follow/ conversing to each other who'll take the lows & the highs/ center mass and right between the eyes

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    PAPYRUS Avatar KEITH PAPYRUS Date: 10/24/2012 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol
    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 10/24/2012 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oooooooooooooh weeeeeeee
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Cold In The Soul Free versefeelings,
Seen Through A Half Glass Free verseintrospection,
The Clown Free verseblue,
The Comfort And The Hunger Free verseemotions,
Mother and Child Narrativeangel,baby,beautiful,birt
The Entertainer, a game of cups Free verseevil
Must have been fate Free verselove
Our Love Ascends to Heaven Rictameterheaven,love,marriage,spir
The Beast Free versedeath,
The Tree Free verseme,tree,
MY IMPERFECTLY PERFECT WORLD Free verseworld,
down here in the trenches Free versecancer,courage,inspiratio
The Happiness Come And Go Blank versefeelings,love hurts,
LET ME INFLAME: A POET'S PRAYER Versepassion,poetry,
Does it really matter Balladedeath,feelings,introspect
Sunlight and Rain: The Prism of an Anarchist Free versehope,
Like Zephyr Breeze Free verseabsence,
Simple Words For Simple People Proseanalogy,beach,beautiful,b
VOICE IN HIDING Free verseabsence,voice,
Character Rhymecorruption
ON THE FRINGE Sonnetafrica,allegory,culture,f
Lust Remix Free versecorruption,lust,
KARMA Free verseintrospection,
Pushing beyond your borders Free versechristian,faith,feelings,
Firstborn Brother Tankabrother,
Tanka 2 about The Cherry Blossom and Life Tankabereavement,birth,
The Perfect Painting Free verseart,beautiful,christian,j
In the Midst of Summers SIN Free verseaddiction,life,
Mississippi Moments Narrativenostalgia,places,river,
BINDING WITH BRETHREN WORLDS Lyricinspirational,world,
The Sowing Free versedevotion,
Sins and Virtues Blank verseanger,conflict,family,fan
OutKast---- Lyricafrica,america,animal,cor
FIRST OF MORNING UPLIFTS Sonnetbeauty,morning,uplifting,
Last Train to Heaven Free verseabsence,
MGMT:Please FIX ME SOME SOUP Rhymechange,community,corrupti
Sins and Virtues Chapter Two Narrativedark,evil,hate,love,lust,
Blacklisted Alliterationanti bullying,appreciatio
Moonbeams Trioletbeauty,
Do you remember me I do not know?beauty,bereavement,eulogy
Guess My Name Free verseconfusion,
'Silent Cheerleader' Free verseintrospection,life,
The Scent Of Your Soul Free verseabsence,feelings,
Dark Angels of Highgate Sestinadeath,
Love Orchestrated by God Free versefirst love,love,marriage,

Fav Poets

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Vicky Tsiluma Kenya Flag Kenya Read
Michael Smith United States Flag United States Read
Keith Baucum United States Flag United States Read
Pace INK-U-SCRIPT United States Flag United States Read
harry horsman United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Richard Lamoureux Canada Flag Canada Read
JSLambert Mister ROBOTO United States Flag United States Read