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Bloggers PhotoHi it is time i introduced myself, I was born in Skipton Yorkshire, England, and still have a accent belonging to my birth place. in 1966 my wife Elaine and i and our two sons moved to New Zealand, where the boys were raised. then we  moved on to the city of Perth  in Western Australia.
After 45 years away we both decided to have a move back to the yorkshire dales where we were raised. leaving our children and grandchildren in what i consider the best places on the planet. (NZ-OZ)
Our reason for the move back to the uk was to be able to discover our back yard so to speak, and we have a desire to go to europe, especially scandinavia and germany.
 I would like to say how much i'm enjoying my trip here on soup, and really loved the poems posted, my bigest problem being time, i always seem to be catching up, being able only to spend two to three days on here, even then with limited hours, so please forgive me if my comments seem later than most.  I also love football (soccer) Newcastle United in England being my team, then music, all kinds but mainly Rock 'n' Roll, i'm  a avid record collector, especially old vinyl LP's of the Fifties. my favourite poet is W. H Davies, along with a few on soup here, I do not get a lot of time to read these days, but my favourite Author is Dennis Wheatley, also i love  the the Bronte Sisters, being raised only 10 miles from Haworth, one gets a real feel for their literature, when one visits the area.   Harry

GOODBYE


Blog Posted:11/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

GOODBYE

NEW CONTEST ON THE WORD GOODBYE, SONNETS ONLY READ THE RULES...
I'VE JUST POSTED THIS, THE WORD HAS MANY MEANINGS, MY POEM BELOW AN EXAMPLE ONLY, IS  OF A VERY SAD GOODBYE..

GOODBYE

Oh the word that strikes mortal as of knife
puncture’s a wretched heart, a life in plight,
bequeathed in good faith, oh yes so rife
yet to a forlorn soul it does one smite.
Is it not that time of a lovers mind
under the moon and stars, nothing amiss,
where thoughtfulness of a heavenly kind
not the doom, gloom of an endless abyss.
So the word that disjoins is deemed to be
the ending of a friendship so extreme,
because together lovers belong, free
free of this word that loses self esteem.
Yet what to do if from this word refrain,
borrow from another “Auf Wiedersehn”?

© Harry J Horsman 2012

UPDATE

15TH NOVEMBER 2012

HI HAD TWO BRILLIANT ENTRIES SO FAR...

PROBLEM, NEITHER ARE SONNETS, AND ONLY ONE IS ABOUT GOODBYE

PLEASE READ THE RULES...........


 






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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:13:00 AM
    Sounds like a good contest- glad you are not leaving!

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/16/2012 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Susan, give it a go ....
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:58:00 PM
    I may enter but only if you promise not to bin me by mistake like last time lol and don't say goodbye xx

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/15/2012 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i promise..
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 9:08:00 PM
    I PANICKIED READING THE TITLE; THOUGHT YOU WERE LEAVING OR SOMETHING AND HERE IT'S A CONTEST. RELIEF FLOODING OVER ME! :) yOUR POEM IS BEAUTIFUL AND SHOULD BE THE WINNER! LOVE, LIZZIE

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/16/2012 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    like to see you weave your magic Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:10:00 PM
    title of this blog scared me, whew, thank goodness its just a contest, I love sonnets, will check it out

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/16/2012 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope to see you in there,
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Should be a very interesting contest with many good entries..Sara

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/16/2012 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    try it Sara,
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:20:00 PM
    Wonderful sonnet, Harry. will check out your contest. hugs, Catie :)

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/16/2012 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    give it a go Catie please
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:00:00 PM
    Sounds like a great idea! Light & Love

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/16/2012 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you're one of the best debbie
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:57:00 PM
    Great sonnet, Harry! I'll check your contest. Ruben.

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/15/2012 10:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope you enter Ruben
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Excellently rhymed sonnet and indeed it is sad, Harry! This is an interesting contest idea. thanks for presenting it. I was a bit scared when I saw your blog title. I never want to see you saying goodbye here!

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/15/2012 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and leave the Queen of sonnets..no way
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 12:54:00 PM
    A good bye sonnet. Glad you are not leaving.

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/15/2012 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i'd miss your poetry to much Joann
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 12:32:00 PM
    oooooweeeee...for a second ,,I thought you were gonna say good bye.... good thing that is not the case.... weeee.... a tricky blog.... nice example,,, always a fan..PD

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    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 11/15/2012 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    could'nt leave without you
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 11/14/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me too! : )

My Past Blog Posts

 
BEST WISHES TO ALL OF YOU
Date Posted: 12/24/2013 9:35:00 AM
MANDY TAMS THE GOLDEN GIRL
Date Posted: 10/16/2013 11:44:00 AM
YORKSHIRE DAY THANKS MANDY
Date Posted: 8/1/2013 9:54:00 AM
OUR GOLDEN GIRL MANDY TAMS
Date Posted: 6/23/2013 5:12:00 AM
POETRY POSTING
Date Posted: 3/23/2013 11:32:00 AM
MEMBERS
Date Posted: 2/27/2013 3:13:00 PM
TIME
Date Posted: 2/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
ANOTHER POET GONE??????????
Date Posted: 2/1/2013 5:43:00 AM
SOUP SLOWING UP?
Date Posted: 1/29/2013 10:00:00 AM
HELP ENGLISH LANGUAGE,SUZETTE C, DEBBIE G, ANDREA D, AND IF YOU'RE LOOKING BRIAN STRAND, OR ANYONE ELSE!
Date Posted: 1/27/2013 5:02:00 AM
TWO ANGELS IN ONE NAME
Date Posted: 1/20/2013 5:43:00 AM
ERROR 500
Date Posted: 12/27/2012 9:49:00 AM
ALL IN A DAYS WORK
Date Posted: 12/24/2012 2:21:00 PM
JUST A THOUGHT ANSWER,
Date Posted: 12/4/2012 9:30:00 AM
JUST A THOUGHT
Date Posted: 12/3/2012 7:17:00 AM
GOODBYE
Date Posted: 11/14/2012 10:54:00 AM
MANDY GOLDEN GIRL TAMS
Date Posted: 11/10/2012 6:43:00 AM
HERE WE GO AGAIN II
Date Posted: 11/5/2012 2:52:00 PM
SHE IS BACK
Date Posted: 11/4/2012 2:56:00 AM
SOME POETS HERE ON SOUP
Date Posted: 11/2/2012 8:03:00 AM
ERROR 500
Date Posted: 10/19/2012 7:24:00 AM
HAPPENING AGAIN
Date Posted: 10/6/2012 2:35:00 PM
DATING AGENCY
Date Posted: 10/4/2012 3:28:00 PM
NOT A CRITICISM JUST CURIOSITY
Date Posted: 9/9/2012 7:29:00 AM
SOMETHING DIFFERENT AGAIN,
Date Posted: 9/2/2012 3:43:00 PM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
12/14/2014 Last Flight Free verseangst,death of a friend,
12/2/2014 One Broken Monoku Monokulife,
10/15/2014 Leader Of The Pack Tankapower,
10/11/2014 One Day To Last Forever Rispettorelationship,
10/10/2014 November Dreams Sijodream,
10/8/2014 Reminiscing First Love Sonnetremember,
10/3/2014 Eccentricity In Love Sonnetlove,
9/29/2014 Locked Into A Dream Trioletfriendship,
9/29/2014 UseByDate Senryuemotions,
9/27/2014 Guess My Name Free verseconfusion,
9/18/2014 Remembrance in Poetry Free verseremember,
9/7/2014 Poetry Alouette Rhymepoetry,
9/3/2014 Old Tea Bag Rhymehumor,political,
8/27/2014 Scroll Of Life Sonnethope,lost,
8/13/2014 Dearest Dawn Sonnetintrospection,
7/28/2014 Evening Song Verselove,
7/27/2014 The Church is Alien Tankaanger,angst,
7/26/2014 Affray of Democracy Free versephilosophy,world,
7/5/2014 Just Do It Limerickfun,funny,
6/13/2014 Deluge Tankainspiration,
6/10/2014 The Rake of Nature Haikudeep,
6/6/2014 No Black Out 1940 Tankaremember,war,
6/5/2014 The Big Picture Free versewar,
4/23/2014 A Treasure in Stone Tankaintrospection,
4/14/2014 Secrets Quatorzainlove hurts,
4/12/2014 Light Haikuhow i feel,
4/10/2014 Dual Citizen Tankahow i feel,
4/9/2014 Oh If only Tankanostalgia,
4/7/2014 Face Value Tankaemotions,
2/16/2014 From The Brink Sonnetlove,recovery from,
2/15/2014 I Hate My Computer Free verseangst,
2/2/2014 Yesterday Acrosticmemory,
1/29/2014 In This Poem Sonnetlove,
1/28/2014 Beauty and the Beast Tankasociety,
1/8/2014 Kintsugi Haikuart,
1/7/2014 Platonic Relationships Tankafriendship,
1/4/2014 Purse For Her Free versetogether,
1/3/2014 Achilles Heel Tankaemotions,
1/2/2014 A Child's Christmas Free verseremember,
12/29/2013 Laying The Foundations Tankaconflict,
12/29/2013 The Twilight of Memory Tankamemory,
12/24/2013 The Very Thought Of You Tankalove,
12/12/2013 The Fallen Tankaremember,
11/25/2013 Never Forgotten Free versenostalgia,
11/12/2013 The Cut Free verseinspirational,
11/12/2013 Beyond Emotion Sijoconfusion,
11/2/2013 Falling Leaves Tankanature,
11/2/2013 Changing Face Winter Tankanature,winter,
11/2/2013 Changing Face Autumn Tankaautumn,nature,
10/25/2013 What Would I Take Sedokamemory,
10/24/2013 At Deaths Door Free verseangst,love,
10/16/2013 The Straight Road Sijotruth,
10/16/2013 Nature At Work Haikunature,
10/16/2013 In Memories Of You Free versenostalgia,sad,
10/16/2013 Confinement Haikufeelings,nature,
10/16/2013 A Child Laments Free versefun,
10/15/2013 A Simple Story Free versenostalgia,
10/14/2013 Silver Wings Quatraincare,
10/12/2013 Out Of Time Nonetage,
10/8/2013 Leaving On A Jet Plane Sonnetmiss you,
9/25/2013 A Girl Called Fate Free verseangst,
9/18/2013 At A Glance Tankalonging,love,
9/18/2013 Grief Of Betrayal Tankaangst,
9/16/2013 Conflict Tankawar,
9/8/2013 Light Of Love Tankalove,
9/8/2013 Love Found Me Tankalove,
9/6/2013 A Green Silk Dress She Once Did Espy Nonetsad,
9/5/2013 Long To Be Sonnettree,
8/27/2013 In So Many Ways Sonnetlove,thank you,
8/24/2013 Diminishing Minds Free verseangst,memory,
8/23/2013 Tree Free verselove,nature,
8/21/2013 Standing Stone On Rombalds Moor Free verselonging,lost,
8/21/2013 End Of Days Senryulife,
8/12/2013 Catch the Wind Tankalove,
8/5/2013 Nothing the Same Anymore Free versenostalgia,
8/3/2013 Some Here Unloved Tankalife,lost,
7/31/2013 Ode to Ellen Tankainspiration,love,
7/10/2013 The Feel of Dawn Tankalove,nature,
7/10/2013 The Face of Dawn Tankalove,nature,
7/6/2013 You May Not Agree Senryulife,
6/27/2013 Prisoner Of Love Tankalove,
6/22/2013 Skype Tankalove,
6/22/2013 Steps in Time Tankalove,
6/22/2013 Amelia Earhart's Leather Jacket Tankamemory,
6/19/2013 At the Pawn Shop Tankalife,
6/19/2013 Summer Sunrise On Mount Manaia Free verseday,nature,
6/18/2013 Harry And Vienna's Couplets Coupletfor her,for him,funny,
6/15/2013 Alas Senryulost love,
6/14/2013 Life's Dance Nonetlife,love,
6/14/2013 Someone Really Care Nonetcare,love,
6/14/2013 For You Senryulife,love,
6/12/2013 Ditch an Itch Rhymedog,
6/11/2013 Just Where We Are Tankalove,
5/27/2013 Pain and Ecstasy Coupletemotions,
5/24/2013 Life Deceives Senryubetrayal,
5/24/2013 To Believe in Something Tankapatriotic,pride,
5/15/2013 The Dark Side of You Free verseemotions,
5/14/2013 May Day Dew Tankainspirational,
5/13/2013 Terminal Tankadeath,
5/9/2013 Being Apart Tankacare,love,

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how do I say good-bye? I do not know?death,father,loss,sad,hou
The War's Over! Free verseallegory,introspection,li
Senior Moments Rhymefunnycar,
My Poems Are Children To Me Free verseon writing and wordschild
Modern Marketing, A sonnet Sonnetangst,men,
Falling Stars Free versehopestar,star,
THE PUPPET MASTER Dramatic monologueintrospection,
Woman's Work Sonnetallegory,caregiving,dedic
Broken Eyes Rhymelife,sad
Leadership Rhymeon work and workingpeople
Itsy, Bitsy, Teenie, Weenie Brain Lyricfunny,political
Thursday Tea With Lucifer *Part II* (Born again Luciferian) Free verseintrospectionfaith,me,
Sphinx Head on Mars Free versefunny
Honking Recedes Haikuanimals,nature,seasons
Henry the Eighth Narrativehistoryme,age,age,body,me
Skin Deep Rhymeintrospectionmen,
White Lace Sonnetlife,seasons
No Greater Hero Free versededication,father,inspira
Devils Deadly Dime Dramatic monologueabuse,day,epic,irony,judg
Love Scattered Free verselove,sadlove,me,
Summer Restored Haikunature
Time Unwinding Free verseimagination,inspirational
wind mutters softly Haikunature
What Easter Means to Me Rhymefaith,holidayheart,easter
How A Blue Rose Came to Be Rhymedeath,imagination,love,ro
NOT GONE FOREVER Tankanature
Yesterdays People Free verselife,peopleautumn,
A Question of Faith Ethereefaith,
Snowdrops Rhymenature,winter,winter,
Greed and Deceit Free verseangst,family,
Dementia Rhymelife,sympathy,life,life,
Samurai Song: Singing Blade Chokadeath,hope,life,
Peer Pressure of the Worst Coupletfear,life,loss,war,
Modern Life Rhymefunny,life,car,me,work,wa
Bethlehem's Star Free versefaith,holiday,
Morning Has Broken - 1 Quatrainday,fantasy,fear,me,
Morning Has Broken - 2 Quatrainfantasy,
Autumn Reverie Rhymenostalgia,autumn,flying,
A New Year Rhymeholiday,peace,peace,
And Now For Something Completely Different Free versemystery,funeral,old,funer
'Uniquely You' Free verseintrospection,life,
Plockton - Wester Ross Rhymeadventure,angst,death,epi
Virgin America Free verseadventure,allegory,animal
To me True Love is Verselove,romance,
Gold Star Narrativechildhood,war,war,star,bl
The Warp and The Weft Coupletinspirational,
A Golden Journey Coupletanniversary,love,
Simple Words for Simple People Free verselove,on writing and words
Barricaded Babies Free versechildhood,family,fear,foo
Unconfined Quintain (English)lost love,
Thirtieth High School Reunion Rhymefunny,school,me,me,
Sentinel of Strength Rhymededication,mother,women,
Wisdom I do not know?life,
In the Sun's Last Glow Quintain (English)lost love,heart,heart,may
'Memories' Free verseconfusion,life,love,
A Great Unease Rondeaulife,me,me,
Dark Angel Sonnetangst,
THE DEVIL IN A BOTTLE Verselife,happy,dad,work,praye
TAPESTRY Acrosticlife,
'Blowing A Kiss To You' Tankafriendship,love,
Harridan in a Housecoat Quaternpeople,children,father,da
Missing Mom Rhymedaughter,loss,love,mother
Morning in the Conway House Coupletlife,me,morning,
The Green Eyed Lad Quatrainfriendship,fun,green,long
Contract Balladadventure,
5 W's Quintain (English)friendship,
Eleven Words Free verselifeold,tree,old,tree,
Wishes and Dreams Coupletday,deep,dream,health,lif
Gift Exchange To Brian From Mandy Coupletfriendship,poets,
Woodland Path Coupletfriendship,inspirational,
An Eagle's Prayer Rhymefaith,inspirational,visio
Prince Harry Rhymepeople,
911 Aftermath Misguided Haters Versefear,on work and working,
Poet Free verseart,tribute,
I Pine Free versenature,
Pain Balladadventure,
Poets Quatrainconfusion,funny,art,art,p
Natural Born Dreamers Dramatic Verse (Verse Drama)death,loss,sad,baby,baby,
taliban Acrosticangst,people,places,war,
Occupy My Home Dramatic Verse (Verse Drama)introspection,
Once Upon A Car Ride Free verseconfusion,depression,fear
Poetry Tankaon writing and words,
Ruby Lips Light Poetrylove,passion,romance,love
Babylon-Kids Prose Poetryhope,life,love,mystery,wo
Just Too Much Rhymeintrospection,
As Lovers Go Personificationnature,summer,sun,
A Road Still Driven Quatraininspirational,love,
Our Christmas Eve Dinner Coupletdad,humorous,mom,prayer,
The Flame Rhymelife,light,
Save The Last Dance For Me Coupletlove,romantic,dance,night
Down for the Count Rhymehealth,
Do You Remember Sonnetfriendship,
Lest we forget Light Poetrygoodbye,
Jungle War Quatrainhistory,war,home,home,
Taken Rhymefear,grief,
Guns Coupletdeath,life,nice,nice,
Broadway Airs Free verseintrospection,life,city,
No Tickee, No Washee Quatrainjourney,life,old,old,
One Second Delay Free verseintrospection,me,me,
wishful Dramatic monologueinspirational,journey,lif

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