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Bloggers PhotoWell I am not sure what to say here except to tell you that much of my story is told through my poetry...I have often written about my journey... I have a brother and sister I love dearly and a mom with dementia who doesn't know me but I love her dearly also. I live with a man I love very much ,one big reason being he makes me laugh!..I have many good friends and a kitty named Layla who is much loved and very spoiled! I have alot of interests including playing guitar,keyboard and harmonica,making all kinds of crafts,writing and cooking to name a few...I worked in resort hotels and clubs for many years so I've moved around a lot but now my home is in Pennsylvania which I love.  

Deep hidden meaning (NOT) in this raspberry!!!


Blog Posted:4/29/2013 5:14:00 AM
The pity is I thought there was  such a rich meaning when I wrote this...now I'm thinking WHAT THE **** does this even mean!!! Well here goes....

Pandora's A Friend Of Mine

It seems I can't forgive myself
for chasing Alice's rabbit.
I slipped and fell in the wishing well
and started a life-long habit.

I want everything-I want you.
I'll open the package to see what's inside.
I want that beautiful rainbow too.
I want everything-I want you.

Curiously it seems I feel
surrounded by doubt-you've seen it no doubt.
But luckily I found the key
to unlock Pandora's box for me.

I want everything-I want you.
I'll open the package to see what's inside.
I want that beautiful rainbow too.
I want everything-I want you.

First of all but most of all
this has been the hardest fall.
Moments are milestones-milestones are many.
Looking for endings -well I haven't any.


 wow you read the whole thing! Sorry about that!!
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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:04:00 PM
    I found the poem very interesting. It seems to hint at something or someone forbidden. Or maybe I'm misinterpreting the meaning. The theme and flow sort of compels one to read further.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:59:00 PM
    well maybe I am being too hard on myself by what you've all said ! It's just not one of my faves I guess..a song you say? hmmnn...

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:00:00 PM
    I read the whole "thing"!! : D Not bad at all, Deb.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Except for a disconnect with the final stanza and the rest of the poem, this was not bad, Deb! I enjoyed the repetition of I want everything - I want you.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 9:17:00 AM
    wow, Deb, this is not a bad poem. I don't whats hidden or what we seek when it comes to happiness.... and yes I read the whole thing and enjoyed~ Linda

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Not bad ..... not bad at all. Maybe it needs some tweaking, but I can actually hear Adele singing this.... Don't laugh - I am serious, Deb. XXX

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    p.iNk Avatar binibining p.iNk Date: 4/29/2013 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I agree, this definitely has a song feel to it-- I enjoyed reading this too!

My Past Blog Posts

 
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Date Posted: 8/14/2014 12:58:00 AM
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I need your positive thoughts...
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Colloquialisms...local flavor?
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Best wishes for a happy New Year!
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Merry Christmas to everyone!!
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short story contest
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Date Posted: 11/22/2013 1:39:00 AM
new contest... The Perfect Christmas Gift
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Crossing That Bridge contest is judged and posted...
Date Posted: 11/6/2013 3:25:00 AM
I now have a new contest posted......"Crossing That Bridge"
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Here is a funny story to make Frank chuckle and feel better!
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Computers:Male or Female??
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Some One- Liners For Ya
Date Posted: 5/16/2013 11:30:00 PM
Sorry I haven't been around much lately...
Date Posted: 5/13/2013 11:57:00 PM
Deep hidden meaning (NOT) in this raspberry!!!
Date Posted: 4/29/2013 5:14:00 AM
Here is a stinker of mine!!
Date Posted: 4/25/2013 3:10:00 PM
The Rainbow Bridge
Date Posted: 4/21/2013 6:26:00 AM
Happy Easter to each one of you
Date Posted: 3/29/2013 9:56:00 PM
My computer is fixed and my contest is finalized!
Date Posted: 3/16/2013 4:10:00 AM

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9/8/2014Pets Should Be Beloved Not BeatenRhymeanger,pets,
9/1/2014Love And LaughterTankafunny love,smile,
8/31/2014Summer's EndCoupletautumn,beauty,seasons,sum
7/25/2014elixer of passionSenryulove,passion,
7/21/2014The Cat's Meow And Then SomeCoupletcat,heartbroken,passion,
6/26/2014The Cougar With The Green ThumbLimerickfunny,garden,sexy,
6/24/2014My Greenest HeavenCoupletappreciation,beauty,mount
6/8/2014Magnificent Beings Of The SeaRhymebeautiful,fantasy,sea,
6/5/2014DestinyHaikudream,future,self,
3/24/2014Tanka For ChrisTankahumor,joy,
3/23/2014The Years Had Stolen Her SmileRhymeage,death,depression,
3/20/2014Squandered HeartRhymebetrayal,break up,lost lo
3/14/2014When Fur Flies And Worlds CollideRhymecat,dog,funny,
3/13/2014Memories On BranchesCoupletchange,nature,seasons,
3/9/2014Life LessonsCoupletangst,life,
3/9/2014Petey's Magical LizardRhymechildren,fantasy,
3/9/2014Who You Callin' Fattie-A LimerickLimerickfunny love,husband,
3/9/2014Imagine This-First Date,First KissRhymedad,daughter,mother,teen,
3/8/2014Guests On This EarthRhymebeautiful,earth,nature,
3/8/2014Crystal Clear TapestryRhymeage,growth,joy,
3/3/2014The Umbrella EffectRhymelove,people,world,
3/2/2014Badly Bent Not BrokenRhymeboyfriend,heartbroken,los
2/26/2014A Child's Bermuda MemoriesRhymeadventure,beauty,children
2/22/2014Feel The MoonRhymeanti bullying,introspecti
2/17/2014Time Is Of The EssenceRhymerude,self,time,
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