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Never would I have thought I would start
writing at 73 years of age. I have thoroughly enjoyed my voyage into the written spirituality of poetry and am thankful for the opportunity.  In my four years here I have met many new and wonderful persons. Having them accept me as a friend has been a moving experience.
               
    

     


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Blog Posted:5/19/2014 11:44:00 PM
From Deb Guzzi’s blog concerning haiku. Date: 5/19/2014 10:47:00 PM. She asked for an answer to the following question and the blog is too far down to get much response from anyone. So, I have written a response here in this blog and hope it eliminates some of the confusion surrounding haiku. 
"What shall we tell this poet about why a title is not used & why capitalization is not used?"  Suz has told them why no adjectives & adverbs & personification or metaphor"

Not only are titles a focal point, and we only want the meat of the poem to be the object of concentration, but they also are a way of extending the number of syllables allowed in a haiku. It is sort of like a cheat sheet. It is fine to title a haiku string (group of similar haiku). Capitalization is not used basically because there are no sentences in haiku, only long and short phrases. The same reasoning applies to why no periods afterward at the ends of the long and short phrases.  The only reason haiku are titled on the soup is because the nature of saving our poems demands a title.  What I do is copy the first line as the title. That way I gain no use of added syllables.
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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 2:56:00 PM
    Chas I think part of the confusion is that 2 of lines must be joined grammatically [as well as conceptually and in doing that we do get a sentence / sometimes [I would define a sentence as a subject & a verb at its base] here's one of mine which has been published [ripples spread/from the turning waterwheel – sparrow song] BUT that is not the only way to join the 2 lines they may be joined with prepositional phrases too [in the backseat/of the open convertible: lace panties]

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 7:21:00 AM
    sorry guys, have to go. Bricklayer is here and I have more brick to clean.

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 7:13:00 AM
    Thank you Suz, that is the point I was making above.

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    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 5/21/2014 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I forgot to add: A headnote does not add to the syllable count.
  1. Date: 5/20/2014 4:03:00 AM
    You have a point regarding titles, Charles. I would, however, argue that a headnote (which is often used in tanka) might be permissible. It does not qualify as a title, as it merely sets the scene (like a little footnote would). Ie If the contest is run with reference to "spring", then I would place the headnote as such. However, I fully concur that the poem (whether it is haiku, sonnet, lyric, etc) should say it all and the reader should not be left in any doubt as to what you are trying to convey (as I felt the examples sited by Debbie in her post, did). Lastly, I am of the humble opinion that poetry (especially haiku & tanka) is a very private matter - it reflects the poet's reality.Su

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My Past Blog Posts

 
Expanding Deb's Blog
Date Posted: 5/19/2014 11:44:00 PM
Possum Branch Road
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Calling All, Want To Be, Haiku Writers
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My Bear Story Retold
Date Posted: 2/5/2014 2:35:00 PM
Poetry Soup Imbeded Ads
Date Posted: 11/4/2013 7:31:00 PM
The Elusive Monoku
Date Posted: 7/27/2013 11:20:00 PM
Computer Games
Date Posted: 7/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
Contest Winners and Bear String
Date Posted: 5/3/2013 11:47:00 PM
My Contest
Date Posted: 5/2/2013 2:01:00 PM
The Bear III
Date Posted: 4/1/2013 5:23:00 PM
Another Bear Story
Date Posted: 3/31/2013 10:23:00 PM
The no contest Contest
Date Posted: 3/30/2013 2:51:00 AM
Hanging Ten
Date Posted: 3/22/2013 10:59:00 AM
Feedback Wanted
Date Posted: 1/27/2013 1:06:00 PM
Wise Guys
Date Posted: 1/22/2013 9:28:00 AM
Mathematics of Success
Date Posted: 1/21/2013 7:36:00 PM
New Soup Rule
Date Posted: 1/20/2013 7:34:00 PM
Soup Problem Update
Date Posted: 1/20/2013 5:20:00 PM
More on the Gullah People (wikipedia)
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The Gullah People of South Carolina
Date Posted: 1/12/2013 7:23:00 PM
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new law in Michigan
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A Nice Verse
Date Posted: 11/27/2012 7:30:00 PM
Mauve cotton Fields
Date Posted: 11/26/2012 10:15:00 PM
Results of the 101 haiku Contest
Date Posted: 11/23/2012 12:58:00 PM

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9/16/2014 Cold Winds Epigramage,
9/16/2014 A Mind Thing Prosedeath,
8/31/2014 The Tryst Rhymememory,
8/29/2014 night breeze Haikuculture,nature,
8/24/2014 The Cure Rhymecancer,
8/24/2014 among crocus Haikuanalogy,
8/3/2014 the tree Haikunature,
8/3/2014 the pond Haikugrowing up,
8/3/2014 talcum Haikubaby,
8/3/2014 her letter Haikuwife,
8/1/2014 stars Haikunature,
7/18/2014 the tern Haikunature,
7/18/2014 the bare branch Haikuphilosophy,
7/17/2014 how many worlds Haikuphilosophy,
7/17/2014 accoutrement Haikuappreciation,
7/17/2014 a single water drop Haikucreation,
7/14/2014 a child Haikulove,
7/14/2014 the ring Haikufamily,
6/26/2014 she giggled Haikugrowing up,
6/23/2014 Metaphysical Transition Free versemystery,
6/21/2014 Yeah, Right Free verseaddiction,
6/19/2014 A light in the Heavens Trioletenvironment,
6/18/2014 graduation day Haikugrowing up,
6/18/2014 puberty Haikuchildhood,
6/18/2014 Heat Senryubreak up,feelings,
6/18/2014 thunderheads loom Haikubereavement,
6/18/2014 an argument ends Haikuchildren,
6/3/2014 The Blues Rhymeblue,
5/11/2014 Those Moments Coupletage,
2/26/2014 Ode to the Formulation of a Poem Sonnetwriting,
2/24/2014 the waning moon Haikunature,
2/23/2014 he led her Haikureligion,
2/12/2014 Can Someone Take My Place Free versereligious,
2/9/2014 The Life of the Hunter Sonnetnature,
2/9/2014 small aspirations Free verseuplifting,
1/25/2014 Virgin's Lament Sonnetmarriage,
1/23/2014 The Pursuit of Truth Sonnetlife,
1/15/2014 twinkle Free verse 
1/13/2014 the souper star Free verseslam,
1/10/2014 my cats Tankapets,
1/3/2014 Linsey-Woolsey Free versegrowing up,
1/3/2014 shoestrings Haikunature,
12/15/2013 grandpa jogs Senryu 
12/8/2013 Dear Mrs Clause Limerickholiday,
12/8/2013 the wind Haikunature,
12/8/2013 the good life Haibunlife,
12/6/2013 my skin prickles Haikubody,psychological,
12/5/2013 moon face Monokusenses,
12/5/2013 shadows move Haikuchildhood,
10/13/2013 truth Trioletphilosophy,
10/12/2013 on the cocoon Haikunature,
10/12/2013 bird of paradise Haikunature,
10/12/2013 crooked arrows Haikupolitical,
10/6/2013 He touches Haikufaith,
9/26/2013 aging Tankalife,
8/20/2013 Sijo 1- roasting Sijosenses,
8/14/2013 Fire in the Night Rhymelove,
7/27/2013 moment of truth Haikubaby,
7/27/2013 insult Haikuconflict,
7/27/2013 intoxicating Tankadream,
7/26/2013 Reflection Tankadevotion,
7/16/2013 Wildflower Afternoon Quatrainnature,
7/12/2013 embarrassment Haikufeelings,
7/12/2013 the grub Haikunature,
7/6/2013 Temptation Quatraincharacter,
7/4/2013 her eyes focus Haikunature,
6/26/2013 Ocracoke Island Haikunature,
6/23/2013 still standing Haikuage,
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6/17/2013 The Siren Trioletsymbolism,
5/15/2013 Blow Gently Sweet Breeze Free verselife,
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4/21/2013 Our Lost Mentors Rhymevisionary,
4/16/2013 Coming Out Rhymefreedom,life,
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3/25/2013 Free Verse Rhymefreedom,spiritual,write,w
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3/24/2013 hiding Tankadark,
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3/21/2013 the Titanic Tankalife,loss,
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3/15/2013 so lonely Haikulife,
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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
Hard Times Cowboycowboy-western,family,fun
Petal Verselove,
Violin Personificationdeath,love,rose,
The Sowing Free versedevotion,
Disposable Wisdom Rhymeage,cat,life,wisdom,
Footprints Free verseintrospection,life,
Alabaster Night Free versenature,sea,
Forgotten Heroes of the Somme Rhymebrother,death,history,lif
A List: I'm the Poet -To Carrie List dedication,
Don't Come Free versedeath,lost love,me,
Mona Lisa Free verseartme,
Love Beyond the Pale Quatraindevotion,lost love,
Humanity Coupletlife,peoplechild,lost,chi
HUNTING SEVENS Rhymefunny
Frosted Panes - re-post Quatraingirl,life,me,sea,time,win
When Madness Rides on Moonlight Sestinagod,life,
-Unlatched- Rhymechildhood,family,mother,s
Missing Mother Versedepression,devotion,me,mi
Why He Beams Diminished Hexaverseimagination,love,
A Gentle Death Sonnetabsence,death,faith,love,
Wet but Wiser Quatrainadventure,funny,pets,
Facedown Haikufunny,religion,
Closer Free versehope,life,love,peace,blue
Love Passing By Rhymelove,love,pride,
My Dreams Versefaith,hope,love,dream,dre
A Police Man's Grave Epitaphdeath,funny,
Pink Ribbon List sad,
Long Goodbyes Sonnetfaith,happiness,holiday,n
Hear Oh L-rd Kyriellefaith,family,happiness,
haiku 20 Haikuintrospection,nature,
A Rising Son on Christmas Free versefaith,family,hope,mother,
Light A Candle Versefaith,history,
Spring Showers Free versenature,rain,rain,
Edinburgh Free versededication,hope,life,love

Fav Poets

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Ruben O. Argentina Flag Argentina Read
dakarai cobb United States Flag United States Read
Cyndi MacMillan Canada Flag Canada Read
Tracie Edwards Australia Flag Australia Read
craig cornish United States Flag United States Read
Chris D. Aechtner Canada Flag Canada Read