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Never would I have thought I would start
writing at 73 years of age. I have thoroughly enjoyed my voyage into the written spirituality of poetry and am thankful for the opportunity.  In my six years here I have met many new and wonderful persons. Having them accept me as a friend has been a moving experience.
               
    

     


Expanding Deb's Blog


Blog Posted:5/19/2014 11:44:00 PM
From Deb Guzzi’s blog concerning haiku. Date: 5/19/2014 10:47:00 PM. She asked for an answer to the following question and the blog is too far down to get much response from anyone. So, I have written a response here in this blog and hope it eliminates some of the confusion surrounding haiku. 
"What shall we tell this poet about why a title is not used & why capitalization is not used?"  Suz has told them why no adjectives & adverbs & personification or metaphor"

Not only are titles a focal point, and we only want the meat of the poem to be the object of concentration, but they also are a way of extending the number of syllables allowed in a haiku. It is sort of like a cheat sheet. It is fine to title a haiku string (group of similar haiku). Capitalization is not used basically because there are no sentences in haiku, only long and short phrases. The same reasoning applies to why no periods afterward at the ends of the long and short phrases.  The only reason haiku are titled on the soup is because the nature of saving our poems demands a title.  What I do is copy the first line as the title. That way I gain no use of added syllables.
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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 2:56:00 PM
    Chas I think part of the confusion is that 2 of lines must be joined grammatically [as well as conceptually and in doing that we do get a sentence / sometimes [I would define a sentence as a subject & a verb at its base] here's one of mine which has been published [ripples spread/from the turning waterwheel – sparrow song] BUT that is not the only way to join the 2 lines they may be joined with prepositional phrases too [in the backseat/of the open convertible: lace panties]

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 7:21:00 AM
    sorry guys, have to go. Bricklayer is here and I have more brick to clean.

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 7:13:00 AM
    Thank you Suz, that is the point I was making above.

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    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 5/21/2014 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I forgot to add: A headnote does not add to the syllable count.
  1. Date: 5/20/2014 4:03:00 AM
    You have a point regarding titles, Charles. I would, however, argue that a headnote (which is often used in tanka) might be permissible. It does not qualify as a title, as it merely sets the scene (like a little footnote would). Ie If the contest is run with reference to "spring", then I would place the headnote as such. However, I fully concur that the poem (whether it is haiku, sonnet, lyric, etc) should say it all and the reader should not be left in any doubt as to what you are trying to convey (as I felt the examples sited by Debbie in her post, did). Lastly, I am of the humble opinion that poetry (especially haiku & tanka) is a very private matter - it reflects the poet's reality.Su

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My Past Blog Posts

 
True Beauty
Date Posted: 1/19/2016 6:48:00 PM
Objective and Subjective Haiku
Date Posted: 1/13/2016 3:15:00 PM
new kiddie trick
Date Posted: 1/8/2016 4:53:00 AM
A Neat Card Trick
Date Posted: 12/22/2015 8:33:00 PM
Charles' Answer to the Riddle blog
Date Posted: 12/22/2015 4:18:00 PM
A Riddle
Date Posted: 12/22/2015 9:51:00 AM
Haiku
Date Posted: 12/21/2015 9:08:00 PM
Expanding Deb's Blog
Date Posted: 5/19/2014 11:44:00 PM
Possum Branch Road
Date Posted: 3/31/2014 11:22:00 PM
Calling All, Want To Be, Haiku Writers
Date Posted: 2/20/2014 3:46:00 PM
My Bear Story Retold
Date Posted: 2/5/2014 2:35:00 PM
Poetry Soup Imbeded Ads
Date Posted: 11/4/2013 7:31:00 PM
The Elusive Monoku
Date Posted: 7/27/2013 11:20:00 PM
Computer Games
Date Posted: 7/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
Contest Winners and Bear String
Date Posted: 5/3/2013 11:47:00 PM
My Contest
Date Posted: 5/2/2013 2:01:00 PM
The Bear III
Date Posted: 4/1/2013 5:23:00 PM
Another Bear Story
Date Posted: 3/31/2013 10:23:00 PM
The no contest Contest
Date Posted: 3/30/2013 2:51:00 AM
Hanging Ten
Date Posted: 3/22/2013 10:59:00 AM
Feedback Wanted
Date Posted: 1/27/2013 1:06:00 PM
Wise Guys
Date Posted: 1/22/2013 9:28:00 AM
Mathematics of Success
Date Posted: 1/21/2013 7:36:00 PM
New Soup Rule
Date Posted: 1/20/2013 7:34:00 PM
Soup Problem Update
Date Posted: 1/20/2013 5:20:00 PM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
1/31/2016 Karma Proselife,
1/31/2016 A Day In the Life Of An Old Man Free verselonely,old,people,
1/27/2016 The Crossing Free versedestiny,old,
1/26/2016 the grave Tankadeath,
1/24/2016 the Shag Rhymeart,beach,bio,birth,dance
1/23/2016 life's changes Senryulife,
1/21/2016 the first time Haikubeauty,
1/19/2016 Indian Summer Prose Poetrynature,
1/17/2016 Old Jake the Critter Lover-A Parody Proseparody,
1/17/2016 Old Jake Sonnetintrospection,
1/15/2016 more and more Haikupeople,
1/13/2016 limping badly Haikuage,
1/13/2016 old towns Tankaold,
1/10/2016 dandelion Haikunature,
1/10/2016 war memories Haikumemory,
1/7/2016 James 4:14 Haikubible,
1/7/2016 Fever Sonnetangel,
1/4/2016 scattered rock Tankanature,
1/4/2016 peak a boo moon Haikunature,
1/4/2016 deep night Haikupeople,
1/1/2016 'grand' view Haikunature,
1/1/2016 soda pop Haikuchildren,
12/31/2015 the gingko Haikuremember,
12/29/2015 memory Haikumemory,
12/25/2015 Purity Tankafriendship,
12/22/2015 Osmotic Universe Free versephilosophy,
12/18/2015 mist Haikuremember,
12/18/2015 the cottage Haikupeople,
12/4/2015 The Lie and True Love Sonnetpeople,
11/30/2015 Postface Interlude Prosefeelings,
11/23/2015 Love Need Not Be Tested Prosemarriage,
11/18/2015 The Last Thirty Minutes Haibunage,
11/17/2015 she hums Sijolife,
11/15/2015 good times Haikupeople,
11/15/2015 you touch Haikupeople,
11/15/2015 Bugs Haikupeople,
11/15/2015 lovers quarrel Haikupeople,
11/15/2015 the internet Haikupeople,
11/15/2015 pregnancy Haikupeople,
11/15/2015 doctors Haikupeople,
11/7/2015 a sting Tankaallusion,
10/25/2015 gold fish Haikupeople,
10/24/2015 the truth Haikupeople,
10/19/2015 The Lie Free versecharacter,religious,
10/13/2015 Tryst Trioletlove,
10/8/2015 terrified Haikulife,
10/8/2015 wilted ideas Haikulife,
10/8/2015 a stare Haikudream,
10/7/2015 Lies Haikuangst,
10/5/2015 rolling thunder Haikupeople,
10/3/2015 poor cherry blossom Haikulonely,
10/3/2015 red nector Haikulove,
8/6/2015 grand funk Haikustress,summer,
8/5/2015 Reality Free verseintrospection,philosophy,
6/24/2015 the rose trellis Haikuflower,nostalgia,
5/21/2015 the gentle touch Haikuemotions,
3/14/2015 gazing Haikuangst,
3/14/2015 lipstick Haikuangst,
3/12/2015 two kittens Haikunature,
3/8/2015 stalking Haikunature,
2/23/2015 eagles nest Haikucourage,
2/21/2015 alone Haikublue,
2/21/2015 haiku Haikubird,
2/6/2015 Innuendo Haikuconflict,people,word play
1/29/2015 on the beach Haikubeach,
12/22/2014 Aging Sonnetallegory,
12/14/2014 Last Rites Haikuangst,
12/14/2014 Last Rites Haikuangst,
12/14/2014 a haiku string Haikuangst,
12/9/2014 the gnarly oak Haikuanalogy,
12/9/2014 A semi quasi pseudo sonnet Sonnetallegory,
9/30/2014 rarity Haikuphilosophy,
9/16/2014 Cold Winds Epigramage,
9/16/2014 A Mind Thing Prosedeath,
8/31/2014 The Tryst Rhymememory,
8/29/2014 night breeze Haikuculture,nature,
8/24/2014 The Cure Rhymecancer,
8/24/2014 among crocus Haikuanalogy,
8/3/2014 the tree Haikunature,
8/3/2014 the pond Haikugrowing up,
8/3/2014 talcum Haikubaby,
8/3/2014 her letter Haikuwife,
8/1/2014 stars Haikunature,
7/18/2014 the tern Haikunature,
7/18/2014 the bare branch Haikuphilosophy,
7/17/2014 how many worlds Haikuphilosophy,
7/17/2014 accoutrement Haikuappreciation,
7/17/2014 a single water drop Haikucreation,
7/14/2014 a child Haikulove,
7/14/2014 the ring Haikufamily,
6/26/2014 she giggled Haikugrowing up,
6/23/2014 Metaphysical Transition Free versemystery,
6/21/2014 Yeah, Right Free verseaddiction,
6/19/2014 A light in the Heavens Trioletenvironment,planet,
6/18/2014 graduation day Haikugrowing up,
6/18/2014 puberty Haikuchildhood,
6/18/2014 Heat Senryubreak up,feelings,
6/18/2014 thunderheads loom Haikubereavement,
6/18/2014 an argument ends Haikuchildren,
6/3/2014 The Blues Rhymeblue,

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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
Hard Times Cowboycowboy-western,family,fun
Petal Verselove,
Violin Personificationdeath,love,rose,
The Sowing Free versedevotion,
Disposable Wisdom Rhymeage,cat,life,wisdom,world
Footprints Free verseintrospection,life,
Alabaster Night Free versenature,sea,planet,
Forgotten Heroes of the Somme Rhymebrother,death,history,lif
I'm the Poet - To Carrie List dedication,
Don't Come Free versedeath,lost love,me,
Mona Lisa Free verseartme,
Love Beyond the Pale Quatrainabuse,devotion,lost love,
Humanity Coupletlife,peoplechild,lost,chi
HUNTING SEVENS Rhymefunny
Frosted Panes - re-post Quatraingirl,life,me,sea,time,win
When Madness Rides on Moonlight Sestinagod,life,
-Unlatched- Rhymechildhood,family,mother,s
Missing Mother Versedepression,devotion,me,mi
Why He Beams Diminished Hexaverseimagination,love,
A Gentle Death Sonnetabsence,death,faith,love,
Wet but Wiser Quatrainadventure,funny,pets,
Facedown Haikufunny,religion,
Closer Free versehope,life,love,peace,blue
Love Passing By Rhymelove,love,pride,
- My Dreams - Versedream,faith,hope,love,
A Police Man's Grave Epitaphdeath,funny,
Pink Ribbon List sad,
Long Goodbyes Sonnetfaith,happiness,holiday,n
Hear Oh L-rd Kyriellefaith,family,happiness,
haiku 20 Haikuintrospection,nature,
Light A Candle Versefaith,history,
Spring Showers Free versenature,rain,rain,
Edinburgh Free versededication,hope,life,love

Fav Poets

PoetCountry 
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Ruben O. Argentina Flag Argentina Read
dakarai cobb United States Flag United States Read
Cyndi MacMillan Canada Flag Canada Read
Tracie Edwards Australia Flag Australia Read
craig cornish United States Flag United States Read
Chris D. Aechtner Canada Flag Canada Read
SKAT A United States Flag United States Read
Leroy Max United States Flag United States Read