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Bloggers PhotoMy name is Jared Pickett but those who have gotten to know me here on the soup know me as Asavvy1. I am 33, Libra and work as a trainer at a sports bar. I was once a member here on PoetrySoup, posting blogs, sponsoring contests, writing and reviewing all of the wonderful art that we do best, Poetry. Then, I took a break!!Asavvy1

Results Posted!!!


Blog Posted:7/12/2014 2:11:00 PM

First, I would like to thank everyone who submitted something for my At First Glance contest, they were all excellent. As much as I wanted to place a first place stamp on all fifty I could choose only one. This time around it goes to Dave Aberfoyle with his poem Red Becomes You! As soon as I read it I knew and I am sure once you read the same thought will come over you!! I have sponsored many contests throughout my time here on the Soup and have never had one with such an overwhelming amount of support. I am full of joy and feel all warm!! Thank you again for posting your poetry in support of my contests, I will see you again soon!!!      

:JP)Asavvy1 

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  1. Date: 7/13/2014 12:44:00 PM
    Thank you very much Jared! I loved your top pick...his poem was amazing! Congratulations Dave Aberfoyle !! And congrats to all your entries.... I am loving each and every one!

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  1. Date: 7/12/2014 3:33:00 PM
    jarred, i had to rewire my brain for this contest.. very inspiring!.. thanks and cheers to all!. huggs

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  1. Date: 7/12/2014 3:09:00 PM
    Hey JP, what an amazing contest. Thanks much for placing me and more for your constructive advise.. I agree with you and I'm going to find inspiration to change last couple of stanzas. Congrats to all the winners!

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My Past Blog Posts

 
When doing wrong feels right!!
Date Posted: 9/5/2014 8:18:00 PM
Am I wrong?
Date Posted: 8/10/2014 3:40:00 AM
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Date Posted: 7/6/2014 4:25:00 PM
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Date Posted: 7/5/2014 6:17:00 AM
Sestina
Date Posted: 6/27/2014 8:21:00 AM
Acrostic-End line Word concludes
Date Posted: 5/17/2014 8:47:00 AM
Collaboration Results!!
Date Posted: 4/15/2014 8:50:00 AM
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Bo$$
Date Posted: 3/2/2014 1:46:00 PM
New Contest
Date Posted: 2/18/2014 2:45:00 PM
Constructive Criticism
Date Posted: 2/18/2014 9:42:00 AM
Gone, Never Forgotten
Date Posted: 2/17/2014 8:10:00 AM
New Contest---- Ottava Rima
Date Posted: 12/6/2010 8:15:00 PM
The results are in
Date Posted: 12/4/2010 9:22:00 PM
Update
Date Posted: 11/28/2010 11:54:00 AM
New Contest-- The Ode
Date Posted: 11/10/2010 8:54:00 AM
Trois Par Huit---Tanka--Rondel winners
Date Posted: 11/7/2010 4:35:00 AM
Contest update
Date Posted: 9/28/2010 11:01:00 AM
Contest Update
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New Contest
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Date Posted: 9/23/2010 7:01:00 AM
Acrostic 2 Update
Date Posted: 8/24/2010 9:02:00 AM
Acrostic 2-------New Contest...
Date Posted: 8/5/2010 5:57:00 AM
Tetractys King & Queen
Date Posted: 8/4/2010 5:01:00 PM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoem TitleFormCategories
9/11/2014Firmly in her GraspTrioletaddiction,beauty,friendsh
9/9/2014AV and his NefertitiFree versebeautiful,dedication,emot
8/13/2014It Feels RightRhymecreation,romance,visionar
8/9/2014Anonymous LetterFree verseabsence,change,desire,
8/4/2014Brown SugarAcrosticdesire,inspirational,
7/6/2014Her Blue DressAcrosticadventure,body,desire,
6/30/2014At First GlanceFree versebeautiful,football,romanc
6/1/2014Letter to a PoetQuatrainmuse,poetry,poets,
5/23/2014Paula SinnerClerihewart,humor,
5/17/2014PassionatelyFree versebreak up,moving on,
4/19/2014Acrostic----EndLine WordAcrosticcareer,change,goodbye,
4/14/2014The CutenessOde bereavement,best friend,l
3/20/2014Satan On SatinAcrosticadventure,freedom,journey
3/20/2014One-Night SuitorMonorhymejourney,love hurts,moving
3/19/2014CoitusFree versedesire,epic,image,
3/17/2014Friends with BenefitsTrioletfriend,simple,
3/16/2014SoundJackLimerickbrother,friend,uplifting,
3/12/2014Random Thoughts 63, EileenesqueI do not know?inspiration,social,
3/9/2014North SideTrioletdance,drink,social,
3/7/2014UnchainedI do not know?beauty,desire,journey,
3/6/2014Quarter Among DimesRhymeinspiration,
3/5/2014Passion, the collaborationRhymeinspiration,passion,poetr
3/5/2014Lets PlayFree verselust,social,
3/4/2014Porn Star EleganceFree versebeauty,social,
2/26/2014WUN LIFEAcrosticinspiration,
2/26/2014A DrinkAcrosticconflict,drink,moving on,
2/22/2014 Random Thoughts 62 Terzanelle into Triple SenryuTerzanellelust,muse,
2/20/2014Never CompromisingQuatraingoodbye,lost love,love hu
2/17/2014Random Thoughts 61 Mirrored RefrainQuatraindedication,happy,muse,
2/14/2014Chose friendship, No fightFree versecare,feelings,nostalgia,
2/13/2014RIP LMB SweetheartQuatraindedication,inspirational,
2/13/2014Eye CandyAcrosticfuture,heart,inspiration,
2/10/2014Impending ChangesQuaterncourage,feelings,happy,
2/10/2014Endless SoulMatesRictameterbest friend,desire,love,
2/8/2014Random Thoughts 60 The TyburnTyburnhow i feel,love hurts,upl
2/7/2014StressedRhymelost love,
4/26/2012Random Thoughts 59 The LentoI do not know?fantasy,people,satire,
4/19/2012A Beach LagoonI do not know?inspirational,pain,beach,
4/15/2012TemptationAcrosticart,
4/13/2012SCOOBSDiamantepets,
4/12/2012Our Love is Destined to GrowTerzanelleadventure,love,passion,da
4/12/2012Random Thoughts 58 The TrioletTrioletnature,
4/11/2012Random Thoughts 57 The NonetNonetpassion,
4/11/2012Moon ChildQuintain (English)love,passion,wife,heart,h
4/10/2012Random Thoughts 56 Minute PoetryFree verselove,heart,heart,
4/10/2012Random Thoughts 55 A HaikuHaikulove,
4/6/2012Trip to DelawareTerza Rimafamily,age,age,
11/30/2011Timeless CurrentsI do not know?love,love,
11/29/2011Insatiable YouFree verselove,love,
7/5/2011Monster on ParoleFree versework
6/28/2011Clear HeadedFree verselife
5/17/2011Future Babies DaddyFree verselife
4/27/2011The ManFree verselifelife,love,me,
4/18/2011Random Thoughts 54 A Kimo TooKimolife
4/18/2011Random Thoughts 53 The KimoKimolife
4/13/2011Good Ol' ScoobsLimerickfunny
4/13/2011The 1st TrimesterFree verselife
12/10/2010Random thoughts 52 The Ottava RimaOttava rimagirlfriend-boyfriendlove,
12/4/2010Untitled Free verselife
9/28/2010Random thoughts 51 Trois Par Huit--Tanka--RondelRhymeart,inspirational,
9/15/2010Random thoughts **50** Haiku--Tanka--HaikuHaikuinspirational,life
9/9/2010Halloween HaikuHaikuon writing and words
9/8/2010Random thoughts **49** Haiku--Tanka--HaikuHaikudeath,fantasy,imagination
9/7/2010Clear EyesFree verselife
8/4/2010Last NightFree verselife
8/4/2010Two Thousand ThreeFree verselife
7/26/2010LifeFree verselife,cancer,
7/8/2010TravelerFree verseadventure
7/3/2010Sudden EvilFree verselifeschool,me,halloween,m
7/3/2010Quiet EvilFree verselife
6/10/2010Ode to TupacOde dedication,
6/8/2010Random thoughts **48** Double AcrosticAcrosticlovepassion,
6/7/2010His GiftI do not know?me,love,me,
6/3/2010Core TrainingFree versedevotion
6/2/2010A Healty DinnerI do not know?food
6/2/2010Peaches, Pineapples, and PearsI do not know?foodangel,angel,
5/31/2010Mushroom Red Mark*** Triple Acrostic***Acrosticimagination
5/21/2010Explore*** Trois Par Huit***I do not know?life,love
5/18/2010Could You BeFree versedevotion,passionlove,me,
5/15/2010A Special Place Free verselife,loss,lovefather,me,f
5/12/2010Random Thoughts *47* Trois Par HuitI do not know?art,life
5/10/2010SupernaturalRhymefantasy
5/6/2010Best ManFree versefriendship
4/27/2010Sexxy BackFree versepassion
4/24/2010Cleopatra in Disguise Free verseadventuretogether,
4/23/2010Random Thoughts *46* The PleiadesI do not know?art
4/14/2010Caramel LoveFree versededication
4/9/2010VacationRhymedevotion
4/6/2010P & MAlliterationimagination
3/30/2010The Eyes 2Free verseintrospection
3/28/2010The EyesI do not know?introspection
3/28/2010PTOI do not know?lifetime,
3/23/2010UntitledI do not know?mystery,passion
3/15/2010Lone Wolf **Tag poem**Ethereeinspirational
3/12/2010Twelve Years In QuentinLyricfunnylonely,
3/8/2010Back HandI do not know?life
3/7/2010Just a Random ThoughtFree versefantasy
3/3/2010Wandering SoulFree versehappiness,inspirational,n
3/1/2010Fight ClubFree versefantasy
3/1/2010Random Thoughts *45* Rough DraftFree verseinspirational

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My Poetic AngelQuatraininspirationalme,
Killing my Other MeFree versefunny,life,visionaryme,me
Windows ApartBalladchildhood,confusion,depre
I bleedRhymedepression,devotion,loss,
VICTIM.....SURVIVORCoupletrecovery from...me,
A Chronicler of OutdoorsQuatrainon writing and words
The Face of an Angel Quatrainfriendshiphappy,birthday,
Mighty RiverRhymeinspirational,lovegod,god
Daytona Beach BreakersRhymelove,seanight,night,
Beauty in your eyesI do not know?lovebeautiful,beauty,beau
Ultimate Centerfold GirlRhymeallegory,love
shhhI do not know?adventure,friendship,imag
Yellow Rider Lyricfantasyme,me,yellow,
GemineMI do not know?adventure,friendship,funn
The 1960'sBlank verseart,funny
On My ShelfFree verselove,nature
What's in a Name...I do not know?imagination
Lyrical LandscapeHaikuart
SO LONG ,SWEET SUMMEREpulaeryuseasons
The Old PainterCouplettime,
In her AbsenceFree versefantasy,love
Over The EdgeRhymeinspirational,nature
' The Pearl Ensemble ... 'Light Poetryallegory,anniversary,fami
Swan LakeSenryumusic,nature
Slavery in HaitiQuatrainhistory,socialgod,men,nig
He WeepsAlliterationfaith,inspirational
Lost EternalImagismdeath
Come Here...I do not know?health,love,passion,peace
THE WAY OF ALL TURKEYSEpulaeryuanimals,anniversary,food
Cup of LoveQuatrainfamily,love,upliftingtime
FearRhymeangst,life,nature,peoplef
Elf Girl Dressed in YellowRhymefantasy,love,natureheart,
The Wreath, A Soldier Chronicle pt. 1Idyll (Idyl)inspirational,warsoldier,
How Could You ? To my Son Joshua, Whom I Love Very MuchRhymeloveme,i love you,
Acid RainChokamusic,nostalgia
A Merry Band Of Adventurers Part 1 of 2Light Poetryadventure,allegory,dedica
HoveringFree versedeath,dedication,family,i
Frozen FallsFree verseadventure,imagination,ins
A Slippery DayRhymeadventure
Quiet PiousI do not know?fantasy
The HomeplaceCoupletdaughter,family,history,h
The DispersalFree versefaith,forgiveness,hope,in
Evening SongHaikunature,sea
TRANQUILITYHaikuimagination,introspection
DreamingRhymefantasy
Despair DispelledFree verseanimals,happiness,naturen
If NotProse Poetrylovelove,
MEMORIES ETCHEDVerselifetime,time,
Leaving Oklahoma Rhymeadventure
Poetry (A Spiritual Release)Coupletfaith,inspirationalspirit
Tanabata (Contest-My best poem)Verseromancename,epic,epic,nam
My Eve foreverVersededicationpoetry,
Sleeping With The EnemyLyricabuse,anger,betrayal,deep
Dreaming of Legos MONOTETRAFree versefantasy,hope,loss,time,vi
WHISPERS OF LIGHTOttava rimaangel,miracle,uplifting,
HerRhymefirst love,girlfriend,lov
She Sold Her Soul in a Bathroom MirrorRhymeevil,satire,woman,
Every nightFree verseabsence,
I Have To TellRhymefunny,

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