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Okay, You Asked For It


Blog Posted:4/24/2013 4:55:00 PM
This, has GOT to be one of the worst poems I have ever written, and the worst part, is that I have a whole series similar to this. Published? yes, LOL in 2006. I must be the world's biggest Idiot. LOL Here we go...

Nevada Day

Nevada Day is here again,
a tribute to our wedding song,
I married you yesterday.
You should have been there,
there was quite a parade,
with cobwebbed cake and all.
I am your love, I am your love,
I am your tried and true,
I am arisen from the dead,
a little forlorn and blue.
Roses for our wedding day,
petals that vaporize in the sun,
when the morning dew has kissed them,
singing, "Come, my lover, come."
I am five lifetimes older than you,
my flesh is but sinews,
as I gently bend to kiss your brow,
my head falls into my soup;
singing, "Come, my lover, come."
My mind is filled with cobwebs,
and spiders reflecting but hues,
on this our wedding day
let us speak only truths,
singing, "Come, my lover, come."

Did I tell you, or what? I am certain this one has all of you beat when it comes to the world's worst poem! LOL The only saving grace is that Nevada DOES fall on Halloween. LOL Catie :)
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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:20:00 PM
    lol...to Caleb's comment...pd

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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 11:52:00 AM
    This one could take the cake...not the wedding cake...its got cobwebs on it. I feel so mean.

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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:49:00 AM
    PD ~ Can I enter a second one of these gems into the contest? or does it have to be this one? hugs, Catie :)

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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Yep! It's a doozy! Carrie, you seemed to have hit exactly on my own mind set at the time... there are several in this series that do mention the spider and the fly. Yikes! LOL Thanks all, Love to all, Catie :)

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 10:36:00 PM
    Never lament cobwebbed cakes... The alliteration......oh the alliteration....

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    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 4/25/2013 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I assure you, I did not intentionally use alliteration. LOL Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Ouch!! Catie!!!!!!!! No, this is not from "my" Catie! Im going through all the psychological coping mechanisms at the same time: grief, denial, anger, depression ... : D !! I think that if you change the "soup" metaphor ... maybe ... LOL! Yes, you're in the finals ... just because being published increases ... intensifies the effectiveness of this "entry" ... I still love your poetry. : )

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    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 4/25/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    funny you should mention that...I think I was going through all of those psychological mechanisms at the same time too! LOL love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 6:32:00 PM
    wow, this is bad,,,, I think you are in line with Ruben and Cyndi...... lol

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    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 4/25/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, PD! :) I do have a question for you at the top...LOL love and hugs, Catie :)
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 4/24/2013 9:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, PD!
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:36:00 PM
    I might have to bow to our Catie!

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    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 4/25/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yep! Yep! I am the Queen of Slop! LOL Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:36:00 PM
    Okay, I'm laughing, really laughing. If anyone else but you had said they had written this, I'd have smacked them upside the head and said, stop telling lies. LOL. the soup line? Had me tearing up. But, I did like the line, cobwebbed cake... or the idea of it? Almost tickles a poesy outa me... something gothic, something "something wicked this way comes" ;) This won't make it to the podium of schlop, but it will make an honourable mention, in my books. Proof that writing improves--- I'm still gobsmacked. LOL! LOVE YA

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    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 4/25/2013 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cyndi! LOL Love and hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:32:00 PM
    To quote our dear Catie........"Come, my lover, come." ----------(said the spider to the fly) yikes!!!!! No...not our Catie !!!

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    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 4/25/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yep! Sure enough! LOL love and hugs, Catie :)

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