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A Pondering Poet~

Echoing Resolve

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Easy river run
down vast beauty light
in morning dawn
crest before my eyes

For autumn rain has gone
sparking light of silver grace
now lay peaceful strokes
on hillside of new day

Each thought still remain
in splashed hues of poetic verse
a quenching bath of love
upon soft sky of birth

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NEW CONTEST -


Blog Posted:3/6/2012 1:49:00 PM

A Test To Improve Your Short Form

How to get everthing you need to say in 3-short lines?

Go For It

Give It A Try

Theme-ONE TREE STANDING IN A DISTANT  FIELD
KIMO form is acceptable.

This form of poetry was invented in  Israel.
Kimo is a post-Haiku Poetic form,
consisting of three lines of  10, 7, and 6 syllables.
Kimo has evolved from the need of more
than 5,  7, and 5 syllables as in a Haiku or Senryu.
It usually describes one frozen scene that has no  movement in it.

-------ONE KIMO-------

10,7,6

ONE

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Lets see some art.......

God bless

^Rick

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  1. Date: 3/11/2012 9:41:00 PM
    i have posted. my first dig at Kimo...was a gr8 experience for me to understand the technicality and write it...!~sashi

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:45:00 PM
    I'm in

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:31:00 AM
    ut oh a dreaded brief form,,,geeezz you know I like to talk! LOL Light & Love

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:46:00 PM
    yesssss, rick... i missed your last gig and will work on this.. more success and hugggs to you..;)

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:36:00 PM
    Im in!

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 4:57:00 PM
    Thanks poetic chic-a-roonies

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 3:58:00 PM
    sounds like a lovely contest. I do enjoy kimo because they are not so limiting as a haiku is!

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 2:26:00 PM
    I'm thinking, I'm thinking! LOL

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 2:11:00 PM
    Get busy Carolyn

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 2:07:00 PM
    This will be a challenge, Rick. Don't think I've tried a kimo yet, but I like the theme of the single tree standing in a distant field. I'm sure you'll get some fantastic entries! Love, Carolyn

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My Past Blog Posts

 
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Date Posted: 4/13/2012 6:21:00 PM
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Date Posted: 4/12/2012 1:05:00 PM
The Results Are In.................
Date Posted: 3/30/2012 6:27:00 PM
Even If You Don't - Please Do
Date Posted: 3/20/2012 9:28:00 AM
A NEW CONTEST
Date Posted: 3/13/2012 7:29:00 PM
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Date Posted: 3/12/2012 3:09:00 PM
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My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
11/23/2014 Monoku 2 Monokunature,snow,storm,
11/23/2014 Monoku 1 Monokumusic,nature,
11/23/2014 Haiku 11-23-2014 Haikuflower,nature,seasons,
11/22/2014 Frozen in Crystalline 4 Crystallinebird,nature,snow,tree,win
11/15/2014 The Untold Story Of The Tortoise and The Hare Limerickfunny,
11/10/2014 Haiku 11-10-14 Haikulove,nature,
11/9/2014 Crown Cinqkuchristmas,december,faith,
11/9/2014 Captivating Cinqkulove,nature,
11/8/2014 Silhouette Of Pale Light Versedark,heartbroken,image,lo
11/2/2014 Whispers Within Personificationgod,love,nature,spiritual
11/2/2014 A Seed In The Wind Versedeath,fire,life,nature,
11/2/2014 Rain Versehope,nature,rain,
11/2/2014 Freedom Flow Verseimagery,nature,seasons,wa
11/1/2014 Impart Laydesire,love,
10/29/2014 Respectfully Yours Rispettogod,
10/27/2014 Cowboy HOE DOWN Versecowboy,dance,farm,love,lu
10/26/2014 The Upper Room Versepassion,time,
10/26/2014 Final Versepoetry,
10/26/2014 Pictures And Thoughts Ekphrasis (Ecphrasis)art,
10/26/2014 As The Morning Rose Versebeauty,love,nature,
10/26/2014 Memories In My Mind Verselove,memory,
10/25/2014 Of Flesh and Fear Versedeath,life,
10/25/2014 The Keeper Versehero,
10/25/2014 Love Verselove,
10/25/2014 Seize the day Carpe Diemlove,nature,
10/19/2014 In Silence Versenature,
10/19/2014 Autumn Tankaautumn,nature,
10/19/2014 Like A Windsong She Was Gone Versedeath,love,
10/19/2014 A Yellow Back Spider Versehope,life,love,nature,
10/19/2014 Bella Verselonging,love,seasons,
10/19/2014 Notes Of A Sonnet Versegod,spiritual,
10/18/2014 From The Frozen Silence Versenature,
10/18/2014 Flight to the Kingdom Free verseart,beauty,celebration,fa
10/18/2014 Never Revealed Verselost,lust,
10/18/2014 Haiku 10-18-14 Haikuchildren,mother,
10/16/2014 Autumn Tableau Versenature,
10/14/2014 Wistfully Verselove,
10/13/2014 October Muse Versenature,
10/11/2014 Radiant Farewell Tankanature,
10/11/2014 Harmonious Verselove,nature,
10/11/2014 Around The Corner Verseart,poetry,
9/27/2014 I am 2 Coupletlove,
9/25/2014 ab antiquo ab extra Free versemystery,
9/21/2014 Tied Verseemotions,
9/21/2014 One Lyriclove,
9/17/2014 haiku-- Haikunature,
9/17/2014 Bitter Sweet Rhymelost love,
1/21/2014 and again you Lyriclove,
11/28/2013 Beauty of Mystery Free verselife,nature,
11/16/2013 Blue Winter Death Free verselost,nature,
11/16/2013 Hope Monokunature,
11/4/2013 Autumn Tankaautumn,death,life,love,
7/21/2013 Of Greed And Guilt Versedeath,desire,life,lost,po
7/20/2013 Captcha - A Great Possession Acrosticbible,inspirational,jesus
7/18/2013 A Soldier's Cry Free verseself,war,
7/15/2013 Long Ago She Was Gone Verselost love,
7/15/2013 Watch Your Mouth Clerihewsatire,
7/14/2013 Haiku 222 Haikunature,
7/13/2013 A Grand Design Versebeautiful,freedom,inspira
7/7/2013 Tangled Vines Free verselust,
7/7/2013 Tangled Verselove,passion,
7/7/2013 Silently I Walked Rhymelost love,
6/24/2013 Words On Life Free verseage,youth,
6/24/2013 Forsaken Verselost,love,
6/22/2013 Delicate Versefire,love,memory,
6/18/2013 Upon The Day - A Summer Dream Rhymebeauty,june,love,nature,
6/14/2013 Facet's Of Love - From The Novel - Of Only One Versedeath,desire,life,nature,
6/14/2013 Summer Couplet Coupletdeath,life,nature,summer,
6/11/2013 Butterfly Versebutterfly,hope,nature,
6/10/2013 Haiku 6-10-13 Haikunature,
4/21/2013 Still - Again - I See Tankabest friend,betrayal,lost
4/15/2013 Spring Showers Free versenature,seasons,song,
4/13/2013 haiku 4-13-13 Haikunature,
4/7/2013 haiku 4-7-2013 Haikunature,
4/5/2013 Haiku 4-5-13 Haikunature,
3/31/2013 haiku 3-31-13 Haikudream,nature,
3/24/2013 Echoes Of The Heart Lyriclost love,love,heart,spri
3/5/2013 Moon Is My Muse Monokunature,moon,
3/3/2013 haiku Haikulove,
2/25/2013 Rites Of Passage Blood Moon Versecourage,inspirational,moo
2/20/2013 A Mouse And A Man Sestinafriendship,life,metaphor,
2/18/2013 Sweet Spring Rhymelove,spring,sweet,sweet,
2/17/2013 haiku 21713 Haikunature,
2/17/2013 Rebirth Versejourney,life,spring,
2/3/2013 Forever Radiant Lyricdedication,faith,father,i
2/2/2013 A Day When Winter Said Goodbye Couplethope,spring,winter,
1/29/2013 Rites Of Passage Versebeauty,death,inspirationa
1/28/2013 2 Haiku 1 Questionku Haikubeauty,love,romance,
1/27/2013 As The Morning Rose Versebeauty,love,
1/27/2013 Prelude Verselove,
1/20/2013 Of Pen And Paper Verseon writing and words,upli
1/19/2013 From The Frozen Silence Verselove,seasons,song,spring,
1/13/2013 Nerves x 9 Free versehappy,life,love,passion,
1/10/2013 Something So Special Limericklove,
1/6/2013 A Sassy Potty Mouth Bird Has Changed Her Ways Limerickfunny,
12/29/2012 Ceremonial Paint:The Circle Versedeath,life,native america
12/24/2012 Away With Procrastination A News Years Resolution Acrosticintrospection,
12/24/2012 On The Edge Of A Dream Tankalove,
12/23/2012 Debauchery Or Not Free verseconfusion,
12/18/2012 Goodbye For Now Rhymedeath,life,

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