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2/3/2013 4:56:05 AM
Blue	Hey everyone, I'm 16 and this is my first poem that i've ever posted. I would like to know your thoughts, and thank you for your time! Blue The night is dark and silent The thoughts come rolling in And hour after hour I wonder where you've been If you ever think of me In this deep dark night? As when the moon above us shines It's possible that you might At one point we were one So long ago it seems a crime But our bond is of a love One that will outlast time If I ever saw you again I'd ask how you've been keeping? All I'd need is just one look Our time all too fleeting To say that I don't miss you Would be an outright lie Without you I am lost I'm barely getting by I wonder where you are When we're so far apart You're already gone But never from my heart I can't ever let it out Or the sadness will grow So until we meet again It's best you don't know So it's at night in the darkness Where I think of you And the night isn't black But a dark shade of blue
3/17/2013 10:41:41 AM
Ignition	This is inspired by a Paramore song, please tell me what you think of it. I gave you all my oxygen So let the flames begin, Ignite the blaze between us, My patience wearing thin. You know I want you and, A love that ricochets, I want you to want me back, I need you to stay. I think about you, But do you think of me? And when our gazes meet, What is it that you see? I'd open up to you, If you'd only do the same, I'm trying to show you me, But you barely know my name. I can barely talk around you, I've given too much of me, I'm stuck firmly in suspense, You have the air i breathe. I've nothing more to offer, Except the me that's within, I gave you all my oxygen, So let the flames begin.
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