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5/15/2011 6:46:05 PM
Who I am	Very good Cory
5/15/2011 6:51:11 PM
Post your best work here	"Prince Of Lies" Betrayer of thoughts Seeker of lies Cold and calloused The one who despised King of the world Prince of the air Fortune and glory Yet not you cared Fallen betrayal Hopeless revenge Promises of peace Souls unhinged Destructive desertion Weaver of all woes Murderous aggression Founder of foes Slithering waste Serpent of doom Roses are withered While thorns are bloomed Master of nothing Throne to no heir True mercy is given To those who beware Accept his lies Seal your fate Or denounce your wickedness For Heaven awaits
5/15/2011 6:52:11 PM
My poem Prince of Lies	Betrayer of thoughts Seeker of lies Cold and calloused The one who despised King of the world Prince of the air Fortune and glory Yet not you cared Fallen betrayal Hopeless revenge Promises of peace Souls unhinged Destructive desertion Weaver of all woes Murderous aggression Founder of foes Slithering waste Serpent of doom Roses are withered While thorns are bloomed Master of nothing Throne to no heir True mercy is given To those who beware Accept his lies Seal your fate Or denounce your wickedness For Heaven awaits
5/15/2011 6:53:51 PM
Playing God	I thought it was good. Sounds like a very controlling force.
5/16/2011 10:44:16 PM
The Epitaph of an unbeliever	Penned very well
5/16/2011 10:47:28 PM
Love's Cross	It is good, but I believe more flow is needed towards the end.
5/16/2011 10:49:43 PM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer	I am one who can actually here a song out of this. You could format it either way, and I think it would be a success.
5/16/2011 10:50:45 PM
Extravagant	I liked it. Almost as if she is a living ghost. Good job with this.
5/16/2011 10:54:34 PM
Tear it to Shreds!	Yes it's very good. Just try to space where needed to make it an easier read. Other than that great job
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