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10/27/2011 5:53:16 AM
Tom Larrow
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A request to tell all of your kinfolk
That are inside Heavens Gate
To keep watch on one of my folk
For she has a special date
Their just east of South Dakota
Though she's in a different state
For these Doctor's in Minnesota
Want a team to secure her fate
Their are many special surgeons
Who all do their job first rate
Prayers are needed, even sermons
Don't want any wishes to be late
In spring they plan for her to home
I guess Grampa, will have to wait
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Back to the farm to gather and tell stories of life, hope and inspiration.
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